Yet another example of poetic brilliance at work. My words will not do justice. I find myself shaking my head in amazement whenever I read your work and at times I confess to feeling pangs of envy. If only I had your gift for expression. *sigh*
Write on...and never stop.
Chanti
I've come to this poem several times since its initial posting and I am always ushered into respectful silence. It can be that way sometimes.
Aberjhani
So gripping Kate, and takes each of us to a similar time of grief. Contemplating that time of mine and the sadness that consumed me, yet I chose to remember the light he brought into my life and that of everyone who loved him. He lives on in my heart. Magnificently composed KAte.
Love,
Taylor~
When I was a child I found graveyards to be unsettling but now I go there to listen to the stories that those laid to rest are aching to tell. A family of spirits, some long forgotten, each with a message to deliver to the living. Walking there, I feel the connection of the circle of the everlasting. They come to life through us if only for a moment and touch a deep place in our soul where they will remain with us forever. From the earth we are born and to the earth we are delivered in death. Outstanding and sensitive poem, Kate...ther is beauty in every line.
Take care,
Sherry
"I tug at covering blades as if
to share your breath and blood,
dry-parched as summer’s hay;"
This especially touched me Kate! This is a very beautiful offering of love beyond the grave, on many levels. I feel this one and know the elements that went into constructing it. Kudo's!
Kate, you remain in our hearts for many reason; the most heartfelt, of course, is the ongoing love you have for your deceased parents. For memories of your dear mother, words take on life, and emcompass the place of her remains. There is no higher tribute to a departed one than this, which you've shared with your friends. Thank you for doing so. - Bill
Kate
How very true
We immortalise our loved and appreciated ones by our everlasting words and thoughts..
You took me there in a instance..
Blessings
Peter
A wicked Cajun Fairy named Robes Pierre entered the impenetrable Magical doll land of Sha Bebe. Queen Faustina, the ruler of the doll land, thought she had destroyed him, but he's back! Will the doll land survive his evil ways?
Write on...and never stop.
Chanti
Aberjhani
My heart was split and a flower appeared;
and grace sprang up; and it bore fruit
for my God.
~~The Odes of Solomon
Love,
Taylor~
Never easy, is it? But what a powerful tribute to your lost loved one, the gift of your heart poured out in beautiful verse...thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *prayers*
Love & Light,
Joseph
(((HUGS))) and much loe, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(
Still tooo raw after 21 years even!!
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
to share your breath and blood,
dry-parched as summer’s hay;"
This especially touched me Kate! This is a very beautiful offering of love beyond the grave, on many levels. I feel this one and know the elements that went into constructing it. Kudo's!
Love,
Eileen
Susan
Such crisp and clear descriptions, showing a loving heart..
Jealous shadows
Natures rampant counterpane
Nice write laced with great grief and hope!
Richard
Susan
How very true
We immortalise our loved and appreciated ones by our everlasting words and thoughts..
You took me there in a instance..
Blessings
Peter
your soil, your roots, your shaded trees.
And you always will, dear Kate.