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Flame
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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For some reason, I think this is one of the most "perfect" poems I have ever written, and, as it happens, one of my earliest. It feels to me almost sacred. It is funny that it has come to my mind again today, as the number 7 is the Biblical number of wholeness and perfection. I have just realised that, if I were to reorganise the lines, it also constitutes a natural sonnet, which I never noticed before... that somehow makes it even more special! Have revised it slightly since it's last appearance here in March 2005. :)) K xx


FLAME


Because a candle burns,
I am not in the dark, alone;

you are with me, but you are not
the molten wax that singes
with its burning liquid skin.

And you are not the cool head
of the lily-petalled flame,
or the pink of its hot heart.

As I breathe out my longing,
the candle flame is snuffed.

Close at last, you are the sacred
incense of rising, smoky strands
that permeates the darkness,

your fire making the whole room bright.
  

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 Reviews of "Flame"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
However did I manage to miss this gem?
What a marvel of verse it is!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 10, 2007
I've got the Bangles in my head...Eternal Flame...
Funny how these things come to mind!
Beautiful write Kate
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2007
Dearest Kate,

Your flame rises and merges with the Eternal Flame! I'm so happy to be aquainted with one such as you.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
beautiful metaphor and imagery, Kate ... the texture of the concluding image is just awesome ...

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
Wow, Kate!!

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
Kate, I love the Metaphor in this writing...for He is with us regardles of where we are. I agree this is inspiring & beautiful!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
Kate,
I can only echo what the others have said...but, also, for me this work is an enigmatic as is it beautiful

Walt

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 8, 2007
Very nice...this poem is filled with the expressions of depth of soul and the display of spiritual essence through thoughts of Light...

very nice.....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
like Dawn says, you're a natural!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
a lovely write indeed and thank you for your personal words about it-i enjoy that and because you love it so, it makes the write more lovely

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Kate...frankly it would not matter if this were set in any of the sonnet structures...it is still a sonnet and more importantly, it is a wonderful piece of poetry. I love forms and find working within their parameters invigorating and educational, but never will I allow the form to overshadow the substance, the heart of the work. This lovely piece of yours in an excellent example of that.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
I agree with you Kate, it is splendid!


ET

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
WTG, flaming Burning Burnside, Kandle Kate.
Reads like a juxtarposition on first read, then it hits home.
Well it is 4am. Kewl spiro write...

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
A spiritual masterpiece dear Kate! Beautiful....flowing....poignant....prophetic......

Peace my friend,

Bill

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Beautiful work indeed Kate today being 07/07/2007 yes perfection in the number 7. So good to read your pen of golden glint.....

Blessings XX Josie

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Once again, your writing touches parts of my unimaginative loss. Somehow, here, a nearness not felt before. You have constructed an amazing bit of magic, to which many of your readers find a relationship. Indeed, a deep and meaningful piece of great wrilting.

-Bill

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
illuminating write. :)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
you were a natural from the start, Kate. this is poetry, beautiful and alive. Dawn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Your poem is one so persoanl I ache for your loss and I know the depth as well.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
You wax perfect in this insightful love poem.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Flame, in this reader's eyes, converts liturgical Sahara into a rite of passage, a herdsman's cataracts, the darkness, a bitter by-product for Sahara herdsmen who have spent their entire sand-pocked lives staring across the sun-scoured Sahara, the perfumed air incense smoke used to freshen to cover the stench of impending death, the flame licking steel pokers turned red in the fire, cauterizing wounds on the camels, the herdsmen standing around the dying man, holding lit candles in vigil. I can hear this poem echo from the 7 pillars of salt transported across the desert...the reading of this to the dying herdsman for his last rites...those candles in the Sahara don't last but 7 seconds because of the heat, Kate...

Sage

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
I can certainly see why this is near and dear to your heart. It is truly a lovely poem with a natural flow and it captures the imagination of the reader as you allow us a peak into your thoughts of love. Very nice Sweet Kate.
hugs
Pops

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
WOW KB ... this early write of yours certainly transcends the basic somatic construct and embraces the heart and soul found within living things.

It also seems to me to be a great analogy for inner strength - unfeigned -and the lasting attributes found only in a living breathing relationship with the Most High Spirit. Well done!

Blessings and Light ...
Richard

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Great contrast, between the flame of a candle and that of love. Very symbolic. Victor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
This is truly awesome Kate!!

God Bless You my friend!!

Love Tinka


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