Perfection in expression and image. I love this one Kate it's like your writer's finger was on a trigger that was pulled quickly and with calculated results!
Ahh
yes
everything in the human and spirtual side of humanity has a physical effect..........some call it presence, some charisma, so sex appeal..........
I call it union :)
I saw them, as I see all your couples......they breathe through your clear, dimensional writes..........
they sigh
:)
pax A
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Oh how I love it when that happens! You are keen to what turns men on and you pen it so well.
I can't turn loose of the two wires!
My gray hair stands with the current!
Electro-words zip current thru me!
Will someone please disconnect me?
Thanks... I am now fully charged, and
thank you for a stunning write, Kate.
- Bill
arousal is indeed an invisible charge that is ignited by the "layered contours" of an "electric smile" ... this poem has eloquently captured the moments bringing it into being with the subtle power of imagery and sensation ...
in these few words I visualized a sparkling smile, very generous and a man's eyes focused on no one but her. It's a sculpted piece by a master and could even be Rodin's "The Kiss". You write as though you were there and it takes an awesome poet's heart to paint words such as this. I'm an artist and your worded colors are perfect accompaniedment for your write.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2007
I'm crackling down here in the swamp just reading this . . . Nice wordage, sultry and electic . . . Gotta love it . . .
oooo-er! liked it Kate - static, friction, electric Heat - super! ('taking off', boggled my brain -was it meant too? May be it was - i was very busy with the the 'taking off' of the jersey and shirt :) if not - howzabout 'lift/lifting off' in toon with flight?)Nicky xx
This one crackles with the electricity of pure raw passion. You offer us a voyeur's view into the mind of this man who's whole being is attuned to the girls every movement...I can feel his desire, his agony of want and I almost feel perhaps a sublime teasing on her part as she if she knows the effect her tender and sweet body has on her lover...oh Sweet Kate this is so sensually enticing and with the use of so few words...fantastic. Definatley want to read more like this. Hugs,
Pops
Oh my -Just enough current from those strands of hair to keep those fingers at the right temperature{he thought}Invisible yet radiant * Contours are in perfect tune * .....So very beautiful <>love * Ted
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nice work Kate...
very nice...
Art Sun...
TD
Love Tinka
Pst..any news from Paul?
Best regards,
Leland
Love,
Eileen
Not much comes hotter than it, bar this..lol Kurrant Kate xxx
Ampy Andy xxx
yes
everything in the human and spirtual side of humanity has a physical effect..........some call it presence, some charisma, so sex appeal..........
I call it union :)
I saw them, as I see all your couples......they breathe through your clear, dimensional writes..........
they sigh
:)
pax A
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
...if my hair stood up though it'd
be a miracle LOL
My gray hair stands with the current!
Electro-words zip current thru me!
Will someone please disconnect me?
Thanks... I am now fully charged, and
thank you for a stunning write, Kate.
- Bill
My voltage regulator just went haywire. Blessings Always, Paul.
Be safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
of her electric smile"
in these few words I visualized a sparkling smile, very generous and a man's eyes focused on no one but her. It's a sculpted piece by a master and could even be Rodin's "The Kiss". You write as though you were there and it takes an awesome poet's heart to paint words such as this. I'm an artist and your worded colors are perfect accompaniedment for your write.
Love,
Susan
Hugs Ch'erie
Pops
Kathy
Few words but the point is clear and on the tips of my fingers!
Bravo, Glen
Talk about electRIcity! Sexually charged, passionate write, excellently penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.