... Ah! Them's were the days... A bit of nostalgia here, produced at a recent workshop on the use of colour in poetry (focussing on just one, in this instance). There was no figgy pudding for me THAT day, I seem to remember, but the thickness of the ice on the milldew pond was divine for body-skating... perhaps I didn't mention that! May this Christmas and New Year Season find you all in the best of tempers, healthy and expectant of good things to come - or, at least, ever-hopeful of such! Wishing you much mistletoe and merriment.... :)) Kate xx
WINTER WARMING
My cheeks burned with humiliation
as your fury collided with my rage,
the raw flat of your hand hard
on the mottled flesh
of my winter-chilled thigh.
All we could see was red;
rags to each other’s bull,
we locked horns with
words’ heated exchange.
By firey sundown, all was forgiven –
the mark of your lipstick a butterfly
soft on the bedtime blush
of my eight-year old brow;
my trembling, red-breast robin heart
puffing out its chest.
If I was given a choice of only one word from a list of endless superlatives that could be used to describe your work it would be 'original'. I'm so envious of your gift for expression. I feel clumsy by comparison. This poem is utterly superb.
Chanti
"my trembling, red-breast robin heart
puffing out its chest"
Oh so beautiful Kate! Happy New Year to
you and yours my wonderful friend. Missed
your work, I must catch up! ;)
Love
Dale
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
A touching write gives way to much thought. Lady J
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
a searing write indeed. ..leaving those traces of red all over. ..[compounding killer closing]
rose coloured glasses and red crying wine. ..
ness
I have to cofess its not just the weather that leaves me cold at Christmas. I think you have captured well how it is a stressful time when expectations are set to high and tempers easily fray.
I love it. The one thing that threw me, though, was that I didn't know this was a child/adult relationship till the end. Lots and lots of red-- You wear/write it well. --Charlie
I can feel the impact of the red as abusive and angry...striking out at a child and a child striking back verbally in defiance but also can see the red of need to be loved and forgiven when the moment is right and lips meet skin. This is very strong and straight shooting and enjoyed the vividness of it all my sweet Kate.
hugs
Pops
I recall a few warming taps in my time but as you say all was suddenly left behind. Love conquers all. Your introduction was quite homey my friend. What is figgy pudding? Can't say I have ever had the pleasure of tasting it. Peace, Love and Blessings to You and Yours. Happy New Year.
Such color. Such power in shaded hues of red: from anger to passion. Exquisitely penned and felt, Kate, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
Ya did it again . . . Walked us through it and brought us back . . . Kinda like acid used to do me as I lay on the floor, head[hones on, listening to The Moody blues . . . Okay, so I got a little out there with my comments . . . So?! . . . LOL
Very Good colour red! An emotional days journey, complete and sweetly told - and hm. it 's expanding this piece of yours - I think you got a brill poem here on the emotional psychology of conflict and resolution - is forgiveness a butterfly? I think so - liked the fiery red, to healthy blush to robins proud breast -i think this is a very cool poem! Thanks for the read Kate, Nicky xx
How utterly beautiful and promising! Your words give each of us a fresh vision of what the cold of 2008 might hold. Woven words of wonder from she who brung 'em! Love, Bill
Merriment through *Kate* by simply showing _up...The warming continues~evolovelvoelleov_Ted
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2007
This would be a case for childline these days -0800 1111...
awww, well least you made up, after the fire "red" and the tears "crystal" with the quivering bottom lip. and went cuddly snuggly to bed with that ouch on the thigh.
I hated it on a cold day being hit on the thigh by a football, and carried on playing with eyes watering in pain, pretending it didn't hurt.
Stunning piece of work, Kate; you never cease to amaze, inspire. Very well penned; love the part about the trembling, red-breast robin heart! That is cool! Very original, very clever, and so----Kate Burnsideish! *grins!* LOVE it!! BRAVA, dear lady!
Happy New Year to you, too, and hope you had a very merry Christmas; I sure did; it was a Christmas of Miracles! And it WAS, too! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Chanti
puffing out its chest"
Oh so beautiful Kate! Happy New Year to
you and yours my wonderful friend. Missed
your work, I must catch up! ;)
Love
Dale
rose coloured glasses and red crying wine. ..
ness
Nice that it all blew over by bedtime though.
hugs
Pops
Regis
Carole~
Love,
Eileen
Hey remember it is Chuckies birthday today!!
Love Tinka
I recall a few warming taps in my time but as you say all was suddenly left behind. Love conquers all. Your introduction was quite homey my friend. What is figgy pudding? Can't say I have ever had the pleasure of tasting it. Peace, Love and Blessings to You and Yours. Happy New Year.
:) Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
awww, well least you made up, after the fire "red" and the tears "crystal" with the quivering bottom lip. and went cuddly snuggly to bed with that ouch on the thigh.
I hated it on a cold day being hit on the thigh by a football, and carried on playing with eyes watering in pain, pretending it didn't hurt.
Keep the home fires burning...
Wishing you and loved ones a Happy and Healthy New Year.
Walt
Happy New Year to you, too, and hope you had a very merry Christmas; I sure did; it was a Christmas of Miracles! And it WAS, too! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Saving this beauty! :)
Be safe,
Karen