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Punta Paloma Sand Dune
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Just feeling my way back into the saddle! :)) Thank you for all your birthday good wishes... wonderfully granted in full: it was hot! K xx


PUNTA PALOMA SAND DUNE


The stakes of me have gone,
the tent of me four sheets
to the wind.

In another country
so much sand shifts
in mountains of deep silence,

erasing all my borders;
rendering me a refugee,

native of nothing
but memory.

But I am not easily duped
into its all-sponging amnesia;
not so quickly lured into a
forgetfulness of self.

Its unstable wall’s south-facing,
its yellow suns an abacus
recording all my days;

its shifting ground’s
my future
swallowing
my past.

I may sink within
its caressing oblivion,
but forever sail onwards
through its rivers of light.



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 Reviews of "Punta Paloma Sand Dune"
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
WONDERFUL!!! Sounds like you had a great trip. I could really connect with this, you've summed up that feeling of being a stranger in a strange land, lol. The first stanza is stunning. Ilove the rest, too, so much to say, will have to email you, lol. I am on a beach and sinking away into its heat and light. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 12, 2008
Happy Belated Birthday to you. May you have a great year from now on. Loved this poetry, the way it said so much, leaving behind, enjoying the sights, lookingto the future, but forever going towards the light.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on May 11, 2008
Beautiful poem, Kate, with depth and imagery. I like the intriguing pic also. It reminds me of one I posted with my own poem, "SAND."
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=68797
Love and {{{hugs}}},
Leland

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2008
WEll, glad to see you back sweet Kate...beautiful writing as always sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Welcome back, Kate and wow what a write!!
Your words painted a beautiful picture
Powerful ending!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss...Morning star

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
A joy to read, Kate! I wish you a belated Happy Birthday, and many more to come! Lucky you in Spain!;-)

ET

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
"...native of nothing but memory." Only one of the great
lines that enrich this poem, Kate.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Hi Kate -tis a beauty of a poem - four sheets to the wind -lol - but 'not so quickly lured into a forgetfulness of self' - right on, happy birthday, happy holidays, happy sailing -lovely poetry, Nicky xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Four sheets to the wind? You must have brought a few bottles of fine wine to the Punta Palome Sand Dune - and I love that name.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Happy Bday to you first off, and this is a butt kicker, awesome imagery here, Four sheets to the wind eh...
Good to read you again, ty kate, xx Ch'erie

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
...the grain of your finest poetry...like sand...the hourglass of celebration...all comes to light Kate...always comes to light...

candles of joy become you...
John

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
SUch a beautiful, soft write. Welcome back, Kate!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
a wonderful write, enjoyed!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Missed your birthday . . . I think . . . Sorry, I hardly know when mine is and if it didn't fall the day after April Fools I would forget it half the time . . . Beautiful poetry for your return . . . Bravo (I know it is supposed to be Brava . . . what the hell?)

Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Beautiful write, Kate; hope your birthday was good! Happy belated birthday to you, (((Sweetie))); hope y'all had fun!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Bravo. I loved your 4 sheets to the wind. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Terraced idiosyncracies we do well to take with a grain of sand. Happy Birthday, Kate...not dupe material, you...I promise it's real pineapple icing with shaved almonds atop your cake...a candle in the wind Elton serenades you...Norma Jean "native of nothing
but memory"...be well, Kate...

Love Always,
Sage

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
A beautiful write Kate and we are glad to have you back. I hope your birthday was one you will never forget. Thank you for sharing your words with us.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Soft and nostalgic, also questioning, through real or imaginary landscapes, the meaning of life.

Axilea

Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Awesome Kate, BACK home and ready to goooooo, HaPPY HaPPY Birthday and may your YEAR be a WONDERFUL BLESSING!
Love this poem, deep in depth
I love the dunes! my mouth was dry during the reading! as I'm sure
yours was, with the writing!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo

STay Positive!
STay Strong!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
So good to have you back at our home again, you were missed sweet Kate and happiest of belated birthday wishes from me to you. This is a magnificent write and that is why you were so missed.
hugs
Pops

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Spot on Perfect!!!!!

Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Perfection in imagery and verse - I am undone! Well done, Kate, and I hope you had a very Happy Birthday!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Well, one thing's for certain sure, Kate, you haven't lost your poetic touch... "The stakes of me have gone," and then "the tent of me four sheets to the wind"... I ask you... Who can write like our Kate? NO ONE!!! Incredible technique--so original, so throughly doused with imagination and colour-- and ooooo, those liquid letters in the last lines... heart-attack delight! --Charlie

Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Methinks you have shaken the sand from your feet and sit the saddle just fine, Kate. Welcome back, and thanks for this delightful and awakening poem.
Blessings ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Sand dunes are amazing, ever-changing parts of nature. We grew up close to the Bruneau Sand Dunes in Idaho... home to the tallest sand dune in North America. Such hard work to climb them... but when you look back on where you have been...the shifting sand has covered your tracks, almost making it appear that you never came that way. I hope that others memories of me, when I am gone, are not as easily forgotten as my footprints in the sand...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
Kate, I liked this a lot...regardless of what comes our way to take away our days, we must stand strong, live with our memories, but forward move onward. A great poem.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 7, 2008
I hear a double meaning in this out of the sands of the desert come the sands of time whisking away all that once was. A life standing firm, yet sinking into oblivion only to rise again...

Be always safe,
Karen


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