WONDERFUL!!! Sounds like you had a great trip. I could really connect with this, you've summed up that feeling of being a stranger in a strange land, lol. The first stanza is stunning. Ilove the rest, too, so much to say, will have to email you, lol. I am on a beach and sinking away into its heat and light. Blessings, Michelle
Happy Belated Birthday to you. May you have a great year from now on. Loved this poetry, the way it said so much, leaving behind, enjoying the sights, lookingto the future, but forever going towards the light.
Beautiful poem, Kate, with depth and imagery. I like the intriguing pic also. It reminds me of one I posted with my own poem, "SAND."
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Love and {{{hugs}}},
Leland
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2008
WEll, glad to see you back sweet Kate...beautiful writing as always sweet lady...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss
Hi Kate -tis a beauty of a poem - four sheets to the wind -lol - but 'not so quickly lured into a forgetfulness of self' - right on, happy birthday, happy holidays, happy sailing -lovely poetry, Nicky xx
Happy Bday to you first off, and this is a butt kicker, awesome imagery here, Four sheets to the wind eh...
Good to read you again, ty kate, xx Ch'erie
Missed your birthday . . . I think . . . Sorry, I hardly know when mine is and if it didn't fall the day after April Fools I would forget it half the time . . . Beautiful poetry for your return . . . Bravo (I know it is supposed to be Brava . . . what the hell?)
Terraced idiosyncracies we do well to take with a grain of sand. Happy Birthday, Kate...not dupe material, you...I promise it's real pineapple icing with shaved almonds atop your cake...a candle in the wind Elton serenades you...Norma Jean "native of nothing
but memory"...be well, Kate...
Awesome Kate, BACK home and ready to goooooo, HaPPY HaPPY Birthday and may your YEAR be a WONDERFUL BLESSING!
Love this poem, deep in depth
I love the dunes! my mouth was dry during the reading! as I'm sure
yours was, with the writing!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
So good to have you back at our home again, you were missed sweet Kate and happiest of belated birthday wishes from me to you. This is a magnificent write and that is why you were so missed.
hugs
Pops
Well, one thing's for certain sure, Kate, you haven't lost your poetic touch... "The stakes of me have gone," and then "the tent of me four sheets to the wind"... I ask you... Who can write like our Kate? NO ONE!!! Incredible technique--so original, so throughly doused with imagination and colour-- and ooooo, those liquid letters in the last lines... heart-attack delight! --Charlie
Methinks you have shaken the sand from your feet and sit the saddle just fine, Kate. Welcome back, and thanks for this delightful and awakening poem.
Blessings ~~ Micke
Sand dunes are amazing, ever-changing parts of nature. We grew up close to the Bruneau Sand Dunes in Idaho... home to the tallest sand dune in North America. Such hard work to climb them... but when you look back on where you have been...the shifting sand has covered your tracks, almost making it appear that you never came that way. I hope that others memories of me, when I am gone, are not as easily forgotten as my footprints in the sand...
Kate, I liked this a lot...regardless of what comes our way to take away our days, we must stand strong, live with our memories, but forward move onward. A great poem.
I hear a double meaning in this out of the sands of the desert come the sands of time whisking away all that once was. A life standing firm, yet sinking into oblivion only to rise again...
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
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Love and {{{hugs}}},
Leland
Your words painted a beautiful picture
Powerful ending!
Peace Love and Light...and hugessss...Morning star
ET
lines that enrich this poem, Kate.
Good to read you again, ty kate, xx Ch'erie
candles of joy become you...
John
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
but memory"...be well, Kate...
Love Always,
Sage
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Axilea
Love this poem, deep in depth
I love the dunes! my mouth was dry during the reading! as I'm sure
yours was, with the writing!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple PaSsion Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
hugs
Pops
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Blessings ~~ Micke
Cryssa
Be always safe,
Karen