I have missed your work! So nice to have you back...
Your poem brought to mind the memory of the twin towers and the destruction that resulted, yet also brought to mind the melancholy mood of the final shutting of a beloved home...like saying goodbye to an old friend and so many memories...If walls could only talk...
It also brings to mind hope...in the future and in things to come. Not only hope, but also action and movement and change...
Congrats on making your move successfully...We are hoping to finally be in our new home in October...sigh...
I must say that your poem has touched my heart and soul. On top of that, it appeals to the mind with it's lyricism and clever imagery. Keep it up Kate! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Marge Fulton
www.freewebs.com/hazardgal
World-class poetry for sure, Kate-girl! Don't miss reading this beauty outloud. Subtle alliteration and assonance litter each line... and there's a sense of finality to the poem-- not too much wistfulness, just subjective, and intensely observant-- reflective.
My favorite lines:
"Today is always twelve:
time’s figure winds on,
setting our hands in motion,
eyes towards unwritten skies"
My own eleven stops mid-chime at the advent of your new day's dawning.
Your analogies and the imagery are superb. Your command of just the right and delicious word is unbelievable. Congratulations on a poem that should live somewhere forever. It tells the story graphically and poignantly. Thank you, Dear Poet. - Bill
This is thought-inciting and provocative, Kate. I find it meaningfully symbolic. It is fine poetry as per your usual. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
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First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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Your poem brought to mind the memory of the twin towers and the destruction that resulted, yet also brought to mind the melancholy mood of the final shutting of a beloved home...like saying goodbye to an old friend and so many memories...If walls could only talk...
It also brings to mind hope...in the future and in things to come. Not only hope, but also action and movement and change...
Congrats on making your move successfully...We are hoping to finally be in our new home in October...sigh...
Cryssa
John
Marge Fulton
www.freewebs.com/hazardgal
My favorite lines:
"Today is always twelve:
time’s figure winds on,
setting our hands in motion,
eyes towards unwritten skies"
My own eleven stops mid-chime at the advent of your new day's dawning.
Edwin
i once left behind a kitchen cubbord door etched with the growth measures of my children
Just when I think you have outdone yourself you prove me wrong. Love the emotional cries in this poem. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Your analogies and the imagery are superb. Your command of just the right and delicious word is unbelievable. Congratulations on a poem that should live somewhere forever. It tells the story graphically and poignantly. Thank you, Dear Poet. - Bill
Carole~
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Enjoy your new home. :)
Regis