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Living Stones
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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FINALLY! I moved house yesterday... Back Soon! :)) xx


LIVING STONES


“To see clearly is poetry, prophecy and religion – all in one.” John Ruskin


Eleven – one numeral stilled
in its own quiet reflection:
two houses, dismembered, dismantled -

here, discarded underlay,
shedding splinters of wax crayon,
a baby tooth the fairy forgot,
dust motes of memory;

there, heat-warped metal,
cremated icons of trade,
the open-mouth scream
angels can’t silence.

Today is always twelve:
time’s figure winds on,
setting our hands in motion,
eyes towards unwritten skies.

Twelve’s sun penetrates
leaded panes of yesterday’s
closed front door,
burrows through
cracks in the sidewalk
to Cortlandt Street beneath.

  

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 Reviews of "Living Stones"
Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
There are so many evocative lines in this poem. A poem of existential struggle written with insight and minimalism.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
I love what you write about eleven. I love the weave of this poem as a slammed door seems to open elsewhere giving new life. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
..closed doors of memories never die,,but new doors opened give birth of a new day.

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on September 14, 2008
Gud 1, the clock ruleth; we are born late only to die early.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 14, 2008
Finely observed, felt, written... this is such a rich poem. One that I am keeping. (And I love that quote!)It's really good to have you back!

Axilea

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2008
Very well done sweet lady...Hugs

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 13, 2008
I have missed your work! So nice to have you back...
Your poem brought to mind the memory of the twin towers and the destruction that resulted, yet also brought to mind the melancholy mood of the final shutting of a beloved home...like saying goodbye to an old friend and so many memories...If walls could only talk...
It also brings to mind hope...in the future and in things to come. Not only hope, but also action and movement and change...

Congrats on making your move successfully...We are hoping to finally be in our new home in October...sigh...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 13, 2008
Kate, I have missed your work so very much. This is just beautiful...the imagery...the sentiment. And the quote from Ruskin...wonderful.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Kate, beautifully rendered, fine of thought and rich in image and imagination. Thank you.
John

Reviewed by Marge Fulton
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
I must say that your poem has touched my heart and soul. On top of that, it appeals to the mind with it's lyricism and clever imagery. Keep it up Kate! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Marge Fulton
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Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
World-class poetry for sure, Kate-girl! Don't miss reading this beauty outloud. Subtle alliteration and assonance litter each line... and there's a sense of finality to the poem-- not too much wistfulness, just subjective, and intensely observant-- reflective.

My favorite lines:
"Today is always twelve:
time’s figure winds on,
setting our hands in motion,
eyes towards unwritten skies"

My own eleven stops mid-chime at the advent of your new day's dawning.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
I like the quote at the beginning of your poem.I enjoy reading it and your poem,take care and congratulations on moving into a new home :-)

Edwin

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
a disciplined merging of complexity and simplicity brought to life through the depth of imagery ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
love the quote-the write is lovely

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
awesome opening quote...this is filled with treasures for both the author and the reader...your details are deep

i once left behind a kitchen cubbord door etched with the growth measures of my children

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Kate,

Just when I think you have outdone yourself you prove me wrong. Love the emotional cries in this poem. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 12, 2008

Your analogies and the imagery are superb. Your command of just the right and delicious word is unbelievable. Congratulations on a poem that should live somewhere forever. It tells the story graphically and poignantly. Thank you, Dear Poet. - Bill

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Fabulous writing Kate, so good to see you back...moving is never an easy task

Carole~

Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Kate always unique and top shelf. The images are wonderful and the orginal idea is brilliant.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Excellent...hope it is closer to Bristol...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Stunning return to the Den and in new quarters...welcome back, Kate, you're missed! Beautifully imaged and penned; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on September 12, 2008
Beautiful writing, Kate; so nice to see you here!! You've been missed! Very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
I especially love the imagery in the final stanza!

Enjoy your new home. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 12, 2008
This is thought-inciting and provocative, Kate. I find it meaningfully symbolic. It is fine poetry as per your usual. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis


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