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Shrink
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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SHRINK

She watched, listening intently
as he lay outstretched on the
couch beside her:

the angle of his upturned toes,
the flitch of knee, left to right
while talking of childhood grazes;

how his hips slightly rocked,
the pout of bellybutton beneath his
thick cotton shirt when describing
the note his lover left.

She observed the rise and fall
of empires in every caged breath,
escape from fire racing up the
sudden rash on neck, flooding
animated features and brain.

She knew the mechanics of a
body’s response to loss,
could identify craters in the
moonscape of grief;

yet could not explain how,
beneath his skin, she witnessed
the tilt and turn of a blue-green world,
perambulating slowly through
light and dark of space;

why she was lost in east-west
wavetips of tides and in skudding
clouds of migrating seabirds, towing
the earth through its seasons;

or when the grey in the curl
at the pulse of his temples
became the benediction
of an unknown god,
his voice sponging stains,
reducing scars,

resurrecting lifeless skin
on her softest curve as if
his own lips touched there.




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 Reviews of "Shrink"
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 5, 2008
sensuous feelings, leaves the reader feeling a bit voyouer and peeping into the private privates

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
she observes closely, listens to voice, hears sound, colour, vibration, sensation, she accepts what she doesn't understand and listens to how and what she feels, empathy, she hears him, 'witnessed' key word, and aware but unable to explain yet all she experiences, this, like the end of the poem gives a lightness and a dawning quality - Shrink - negative connotations? Na! I didnt feel that when i read the poem at all, reduced in the poem are stains and scars. Being witnessed, loved, psychological emotional stains and scars are understood, energetically liberate the minds pathways, a sensed and sensual revival of both, how it should be surely - beautifully phrased poem, each verse a chapter, last stanzarella a real beauty to contain all this, well done Kate xx


Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on December 2, 2008
this was my first read of one of your works and my what a delight to read,
stan

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
outstanding work on passion and sensuality retracing their hidden motivations of what is and what is not ...

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
...so glad my hubby is not a shrink. My blue-green world would have turned to green-green in a trice! But what you describe here, is precisely the relationship that comes from a vulnerable being, and a willing listener. And don't our mother hands yearn to stroke the brow (ego?) of every man who cries out, belly-side-up, from the overwhelming noise and gore of crashing dreams? ...our most deep-seated reflexes are geared towards preservation-- first, self's, then others'--trying to resurrect whatever is lifeless. --Charlie

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Kate, you traced the journey through mind on mind so precisely
and metaphorically that we traveled with you. Excellent. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
The beauty and wisdom that comes through in this absolutely lovely peace is one that is worth repeating....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Oh, my - breathtakingly penned and imaged verse! Undone by your words once again: to write like this ... stunning!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Marge Fulton
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
I love the part... his temples became the benediction of an unknown god. Brilliant, simply brilliant Kate!
Marge Fulton
www.hazardgal.com


Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Great imagery and credibility. Awesome. Liz

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
...excellent work here Kate...listening within...painting within...and she perhaps falling...feeling heat...seeking renewal.
all is touched upon here...
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Oh Sweet Kate, you captured such a tender intimate moment in a word picture that was like watching a scene from behind a curtain. You allowed us to view each wrinkle and pimple of this man's body and soul and to feel the heat of his lover's thighs looking for relief. I think this is one of my new favorites of yours and defiantely a keeper.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
This is really great work Kate....you take the thoughts of two minds and combine the expressed and the silent and they find each other at a specific time and moment....granted the one is expanding upon the other, still it is the way you almost meld them together...that last if brings us back to the reality of the Shrink who has escaped into the fantasy of her own...



nice...



Art Sun...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
One of your longer poems that delves into the unconscious state looking for answers to the yearning of his touch.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Imagery...incredible,and the sensuality....I love it.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
This is a fantastic write... for a lass who knows life. You confirm what men have known for eons; women do yearn for instant submission, and for the least of reasons! Good structure of thought, but I tire of so many lines without capital letters. Dunno why? - Bill

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Ebullient lettering like paint brushes spill over this un_framable canvas (~~)Ted

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
a truly beautiful write-such a feast for the senses!

Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Stunning imagery, Kate; excellent! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D X0X0X0X0

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Hi Kate,you have written an excellent poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
A lusty, seductive poem about a lusty, would-be seductive shrink . . . Sometimes we just cannot help ourselves, eh? . . . Physical wants have overshadowed everything else for the moment throughout time . . . How else did Eve entice Adam to take that first bite? . . . How indeed . . .


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