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The Dress
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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THE DRESS


It cost the earth,
an outrageous slip
of shapeless silk,
mere slick of colour
that took three goes
to work out which way
to put it on.

Our eyes smiled, exchanged
frivolities to cover the waiter’s
fumbling with an obstinate cork,
wine’s rosy flow reflecting then
between collar and chin
as he poured.

How I envied the ragout
it’s ruby fleck strayed
to your glistening cheek,
the napkin’s starched pleats melting
to soft folds in your warm lap.

Slow dance of spoons
smooched through shared dessert;
long-tongued flames teased
scent’s heady confection couched
later within four-poster drapes.

Loose-buttoned layers, misleading straps –
pretending we knew what we were doing;
pretending we didn’t.

Giving up. Eventually.

Now just a crumpled bandeau
wreathing my dewy belly,
the dress with its gloating price tag
grins at us intact:

“But worth it” merged figures agree.




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 Reviews of "The Dress"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
...ONE SPENDS 'OODLES' ON THAT 'SPECIAL FROCK' FOR THAT 'SPECIAL DATE' AND ONLY...IF...DURING THE COURSE OF THE EVENING, IT ENDS UP CRUMBLED IN A BEDROOM..SOMWHERE...IS THE MONEY PAID FOR IT CONSIDERED 'WORTH IT'. INTERESTING, BUT IN MANY CASES...SO TRUE. GOOD JOB AND THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST FANTASTIC. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on June 19, 2009
This poem of sweet memories and a night to be in the heart FOREVER is such a delight Kate!
I know it's been awhile since I've been here, but I saw your NEW BIO Pict. Love your spirit and look about you!
Your writing is AMAZING!
A story within a poem, SWEET!

WRITE ON!
Purple Lady Passion, SHEExoooo


Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 16, 2009
Sounds like a romantic night, wearing just the right dress. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on June 14, 2009
I read this one very quickly, as if I was reading a short story, and wanted to know the end. Great rhythm and I think that you did a great job with your choice of vocabulary, something that I really noticed the second time I read it.

Axilea

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
ahhh.....rum pumpumpum nights. ..
i dun wear dresses much; they tend to [ahem] end up too wrinkly. . .easy access [did i say that out loud???? oops]
but this was a treat to get lost in.
dessert indeed.


Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
Makes the imagination run wild. Great poem.
Cute face on your bio pic too.

Legacy

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
Wao! What a fantastic write Kate, you took me there...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 11, 2009
Lovely rewards, it must be all in the packaging...(smiles) splendid write, Kate

Carole~

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on June 11, 2009
A dress that seals a marriage! Hang on to it and the reward\lesson of the evening~ Great writing. - Bill (One of those in pants)

Reviewed on June 11, 2009
Always original, always moving. You rock Sweet Kate.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
probably took just one try to get it off and was well worth it ;)

vivid story telling as always ... imagery to dress for ;)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
That dress is you, Kate. And you, well I'll
let your war, inviting poem speak for itself.
Tbanks for allowing me to peek. -gene.

Reviewed by . . (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
A future of hope. The dress says, no. The hope was not to be.
The dress may be reconfigured for better time.
It is storey in poem. Big meaning.
Like it much.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
Oh my kate, the images your gifted words project are awesome! I saw the entire scene played out before me to perfection! Your descriptions are incredible!Kudo's! What a fabulous dress!;-)...ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
i like this!, the dress becomes a token of this cherished memory!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
A wonderful write...inspiring and well done. There are those items that bring us priceless rewards...enjoyed!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
Some things are near priceless others are worth it. Lady J

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
Lovely piece, Kate, passionate and so very romantic...
ah, the dress ;) 'But worth it' ... very much so!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
I have two words for this Kate; incredibly awesome, and romantic. Oh oops, uhm three words. LOL. You have painted a scene, I think, from one of those classic greats you say you are ill-read of. This is truly amazing, and awe-inspiring for any person who is in love, and a dress is just a dress, until it comes off in the throes of romantic unity. I loved reading this and thank you so much for making me smile.'

Oh and another thing too. You can give me your long winded comments anytime you wish, because they are very much appreciated.

Love & hugs,
Barbara

Reviewed on June 10, 2009
Hi Kate, what an awe-write! Only you could pen such passion... in a spoon :) thank you for sharing this...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on June 10, 2009
One word: Incredible!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
Wow! A slow dance of spoons smooched through shared dessert. Wow!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
"Slow dance of spoons smooched through shared dessert;"...Kate, I love these lines...this poem is so passionate and so clever...only you could come up with this!
l

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
A well written poem,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
When you adorn the female body it should be with the best that clings to every curve and accents it so well.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Cold, yet so warm, it was my life, Kate. Silky, and rough.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
That dress sure gets a lot of credit. I bet it felt pretty smug about the whole affair... :)

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Such imagery... well... it...um... leaves me blushing... :~)

Love the line of spoons smooching over shared dessert.

Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Forget dresses, think you'd look alot better in the "au naturale" (sp?) though watch where you do that sort of thing...;-) Ed

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
expressed through the feminine expression via that dress...beautiful, tasteful, and definately worth it :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
This dress, it seems to me, is symbolic and significant of so much that I am left reading again... ...and gathering more. Thank you for sharing, Kate. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Spectacular imagery,,,a story unfolded of romance and play...wow Kate you out-did yourself,,,,and that dress 'sigh'...nice work!
hmmmm gonna get me a new dress tomorrow I think.

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
There's much a man can learn of a woman's sensibilities from your poem. Your dress, once commanding a night of romance, is now "a crumpled bandeau" as true passion overwhelms it. Terrific.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Seductive, erotic and tender at once. The dress which cost a fortune "sacrificed" in the dance, but willingly so as it served its purpose. Luckily to our delight!

Lin

Reviewed on June 9, 2009
I love the way you write - this in itself could be a poem -

" ... slow dance of spoons
smooched through shared dessert; .... " *sigh* DELIcious.

And the rest of the write leaves the reader with a wonderful afterglow ... yes. Indeed. =] Well done, Kate!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Beautiful write, Kate; you are the Queen of Imagery! BRAVA; very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
So warm, tender and very inviting is ways that allure so profoundly. Beautiful writing Kate...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Kate,
Devilishy, teasingly clever, subtle and so erotic. Why couldn't ya have worm something....uncomplicated? Ah but then half the fun would've gone. Love it, Kate, love it!
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Oh la la...this could have been a prelude part one poem to my own Wrinkled Sheets and Breakfast poem that you gave such a warm (hot) review to. Very nice images that put the sensual mind on overload sweet Kate. Thank you for sharing...
hugs
fee


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