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Shadow
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SHADOW


How I would outrun you,
your saucer-eyed surprise round
every moonlit corner;
your long face of pity
under canopy of pines.

Still you tapped my shoulder,
lengthened my grasp
on worlds from which
I’d otherwise slip anchor;

minimised me to a
dark, crouched ball,
fire blazing overhead.

I drained you pale as tallow
but still you waxed lyrical
like a softly sloughing skin,

completing my incompleteness.



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 Reviews of "Shadow"
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
WOW! Truly Expressive over mind, body and soul Kate!
I like your creative expressiveness and the flow, and the 3rd verse floored me

WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passions,SHEExooo

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on August 22, 2009
The last stanza is mesmerizing...
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on August 20, 2009
Another brilliant poem, both in ideation (if that is the right word) and flow. You have given life to the shadow!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
your metaphor unwinds gently like a ball of yarn in the hands of a seasoned seamstress -- you waxed this one with precision Kate -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2009
nice images you create

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
ah, to lengthen one's grasp...
love this spirited write, kate. well done!
cg

Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Hi Kate, what a wonder you are with words and thoughts... so intellectual.... this speaks for the shadow... thank you for sharing this....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Kate,
You capture that saying about opposites completing one another. There are so many things we'd never be exposed to without that perfect someone to show us and vice versa. Love your word choices in this one. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
I like this, it creates images of Peter Pan; and all of the wonders that still abound in our world!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
love that middle bit..."minimised....fire blazing overhead"


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
This is just flat out brilliant, and a joy to read!,Kate

ET

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
A remarkable poetic moment here KB.
The imagery and message flows
like hot lyrical wax.
rlc

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Kate, you emerge from the shadows with lines I read
and reread in unabashed delight and envy, as you wax
lyrically...

like a softly sloughing skin,
completing my incompleteness.

-gene.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
This is fabulous Kate...your writing always delights me.

Carole~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
shadows are transparent until someone fills them ...

waxed lyrical empirical ...

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
As always, more brilliant work.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Opposites attract and a shadow is reassuring, you just have to accept that it's there. To be complete, it sounds so good, it sounds so true and yet, I wonder if I really understand what it means "to be complete". Sorry, these are just random thoughts after reading your inspiring piece of writing.
I love those "p" sounds in the first stanza... Lovely imagery of contrasts. :)

Axilea

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
So very lyrically metaphorical in a completly magical way.


Walt

Reviewed on August 5, 2009
To write like this - sigh. Beautiful, Kate, as always -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Kate,I don't know how you do this, these metaphors that are heavenly glorious but I never tire of reading your work and feeling the intellect and energy behind them. This poem is so unique and captivates the mind and emotions with new thoughts about shadows.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
You in front of a candle, me there, not going away no matter how you shake things, I will be there even after you blow off the flame.

Your Shadow


Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
No way to escape your shadow Kate. Thank you for sharing a great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 5, 2009
The Shadow knows you've penned a gem here.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Clever and beautifully done, Kate.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
This is great! One of the best shadow poems i have read!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Now I have to go think... Great write, Kate.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
like the sound and rythem of this one sweet Kate,, how you unwind it with such a personal feeling with love permeating the whole story.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Kate,
Not just clever but deep and consummate writing, expert and with the ease of mastery.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
...hand in hand with our shadow...a part of whom we are..love this captivating piece of work!
love,Christine

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
How we have been fascinated by our shadows...from early tumbles, to daring jumps, to vainly checking our "shapes". But you have brought the shadow to its apex with this beautiful, lyrical form, dear Kate. Tip o' the cap, girl!!
Blessings and Love - Micke
(and a chocolate...or two :o)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
You light up the dark corners with the light from your poetry

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Kate, you ROCK!! AWESOME write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
masterful writing, Kate, so very, very good!

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 4, 2009
EXCELLENT...YOUR IMAGERY IS ABSOLUTELY TERRIFIC. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on August 4, 2009
Beautifully done, Kate. Isn't it amazing how much a shadow changes shape, but it never leaves you, even in the faintest light. Love it!


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