your metaphor unwinds gently like a ball of yarn in the hands of a seasoned seamstress -- you waxed this one with precision Kate -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Kate,
You capture that saying about opposites completing one another. There are so many things we'd never be exposed to without that perfect someone to show us and vice versa. Love your word choices in this one. Hugs,
Sheila
Opposites attract and a shadow is reassuring, you just have to accept that it's there. To be complete, it sounds so good, it sounds so true and yet, I wonder if I really understand what it means "to be complete". Sorry, these are just random thoughts after reading your inspiring piece of writing.
I love those "p" sounds in the first stanza... Lovely imagery of contrasts. :)
Kate,I don't know how you do this, these metaphors that are heavenly glorious but I never tire of reading your work and feeling the intellect and energy behind them. This poem is so unique and captivates the mind and emotions with new thoughts about shadows.
How we have been fascinated by our shadows...from early tumbles, to daring jumps, to vainly checking our "shapes". But you have brought the shadow to its apex with this beautiful, lyrical form, dear Kate. Tip o' the cap, girl!!
Blessings and Love - Micke
(and a chocolate...or two :o)
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
I like your creative expressiveness and the flow, and the 3rd verse floored me
WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passions,SHEExooo
Cryssa :~)
love this spirited write, kate. well done!
cg
In Spirit,
Bear
You capture that saying about opposites completing one another. There are so many things we'd never be exposed to without that perfect someone to show us and vice versa. Love your word choices in this one. Hugs,
Sheila
ET
The imagery and message flows
like hot lyrical wax.
rlc
and reread in unabashed delight and envy, as you wax
lyrically...
like a softly sloughing skin,
completing my incompleteness.
-gene.
Carole~
waxed lyrical empirical ...
I love those "p" sounds in the first stanza... Lovely imagery of contrasts. :)
Axilea
Walt
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
EDWIN
Your Shadow
Newfie Hugs, Rose
hugs
fee
Not just clever but deep and consummate writing, expert and with the ease of mastery.
John
love,Christine
Blessings and Love - Micke
(and a chocolate...or two :o)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D