NaPoWriMo - National Poetry Writing Month. I have pledged to take part in this and write "something" every day, even if it's only a fragment, a phrase to start from or an unintelligible stream of consciousness.
Day 1 has proved somewhat "uneventful"! I had been anticipating the freedom to go "completely wild" and abandon all sense of poetic constraint, however what has come today is not so very outlandish. What has alarmed me more is the need I seem to have to tidy my work, to package it up and make sense of it. I can see that to leave things as "nonsense" or fragmented is going to prove the real challenge, not the material. Still, it IS only Day 1!! :))
Please don't feel obliged to keep up with the comments. I am bound to post every day for a month, if I stick with the programme, but shall not be able to spend a corresponding amount of time reviewing others' work, sadly, though I will be here as much as I can. But thank you all for your participation in this as and when. I hope together we can break some new ground. K xx
the Artist is present
sitting before you, hands clasped
between her knees or leaning
forward, legs spread wide.
A challenge. You are invited, just
as you are, to sit across the table
as long as you like, engaging her
silent stare. Perhaps she’s not there?
Fill her space. Inhale her breath.
Feel the imperfected torment
unseen beneath her blouse.
Upstairs, couples in frieze-form
are naked. Or run to each other
over and over; colliding, bouncing
off again. Arms braced to their sides.
Elsewhere back-to-back, their
luxuriant lengths of black, wavy hair
knot them Siamese.
Up-close, monochrome vids show
A Scream: male into a female’s face;
she into his. Then their sustained kiss –
deep, deeper, deeper still.
A woman curls loosely around
a skeleton, tender as spoons.
Her eyes are bruising, her unknown
thoughts crumble the bones.
Fields of peasant girls, women,
wild in ponderous rain, drop
to their knees, lift heavy skirts
and present bare genitals
to sky’s fellatio tears.
The Artist is here, present.
So, too, the genderless-uniformed
guards not paid to ask or think
but to stop you speaking a word
to her, prevent you touching
something.
based on Marina Abramovic’s retrospective interactive performance art
currently at MoMA, New York
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Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2010
It all sounds like an outrage--what is going on here; does the artist know she is so beautiful or not? My goodness, he should get up and have a look for all of us. Maybe, while he is looking, he will accidentally bump the guard off the planet, so we can see for ourselves--release our hands, tied beside us, to touch with the muse. Oh, of course, with her permission only, or submission. Having gone so far over the edge, I have only to say "Gosh ... you're beautiful, Kate". Nice writing, and with much to flutter our brains in. I am not a matching set of marbles--no ... I am not. Thanks.
"The Artist" is indeed here, and in full blossoming beautiful form at that. What I appreciate most about these lines are the interwoven perspectives and detailed imagery, flowing from the interest of the observer through the felt aesthetics of the creative artist and to the created works themselves. The poem overall like a quietly sparkling champagne of sense and sensibility.
Much gratitude for this and for your National Poetry Month 2010 marathon in progress.
conceptually stimulating as well as extremely well written ... true art is free of confinement yet when we encapsulate it it seems to take on a life of its own ... only our minds can touch its dimensions ...
Very thought provoking for me, confronting the worlds of art and reality, symbols with representations. As for your prose, I have to say that your eighth stanza is the one I prefer: clear, striking and symbolic at the same time. The following stanza, to me, introduces the idea that art is something that needs that little distance, a quality that keeps it slightly untouched and untouchable.
Very vivid imagery throughout, Kate. From the clasped hands to - one of my favorite lines - "thoughts crumble the bones". Quite the challenge you've set for yourself! Good luck. Hugs,
Sheila
We can read, we can visualize, images will dance in front of our inner eyes, but then...the reader is a painter that has done it before, with many hues, painting many desires and naked dreams, lust mixed with tenderness, innocence with depravity, the artist gives us it all...
You have been to the art gallery, kate, and seen a thing or two! I like this genre of art-inspired poems. Paul Durcan has a whole book of them - poems inspired by paintings, and the paintings and poems together in the same book. That would be a lovely commission for any poet, pen portaits of favourite art. Happy Easter!
Thanks, Guys! :)) Reading this over I'm not sure that it's entirely clear that most of the "exhibits" are alive and naked, in action or "frieze-form". Maybe it is. And this is not from imagination; in fact, I have tried to write as visually objective a description of some of the events/exhibits as possible so as to allow for personal interpretation/response. The only place where my own "prejudice" (in the poetic, narrative sense) and reflection creep in is in the final stanza. I take Charlie's point entirely. Yes, Marina Abramovic is Yugoslav and born 1946. So glad and interested to have your thoughts on this. I was... intrigued! :)) xx
You give us situations, and then responses. It makes me think about how culture contributes to perception, and what we'd conceive as normal reactions to them. In each case above, the responses differ dramatically from what we'd expect. How much of what we expect is culture-driven? For example, in South America, the pointing finger is naturally the middle finger; picking your nose in public is accepted, touching your teeth? NOT!! A woman exposing her breast in public would merely have the men and others wondering where her suckling child is. All the situations I mentioned would have vastly different responses in my own culture, which leads me to think that perhaps the Artist above is from a culture where the above situations are not sexual at all, but perceived as normal behavior. The "genderless-uniformed guards" perhaps are a metaphor for the Artist's entire society.
Imagine what it would be like for one of her people to slip into our society by mistake-- my, what an uproar on down-town Main St!!! --Charlie
Kate, your imagination ripped off a flourish -- the "genderless", omnipresent "guards" reflect a reality disturbing because of the pervasiveness of the matter throughout society -- oppressive -- resisting the will to "tidy our work" is where a great deal of our creativity is dashed upon the rocks of the mundane -- our work always reflects the same -- good stuff here Kate -- peace and love be with you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Kewl. Everyday with Katie can only be a fantastic thing.
However, I don't see this as sensual. It has a grey feeling, an undercurrent close to that of abuse; trafficking and tyranny.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Much gratitude for this and for your National Poetry Month 2010 marathon in progress.
Aberjhani
Axilea
Sheila
Georg
Regis
So now you are a peeping Kate (tom), better be careful, you could get arrested for doing that...;-) Ed
PS: hope you stick to your commitment regards the poetry month...e
Imagine what it would be like for one of her people to slip into our society by mistake-- my, what an uproar on down-town Main St!!! --Charlie
Newfie Hugs, Rose
However, I don't see this as sensual. It has a grey feeling, an undercurrent close to that of abuse; trafficking and tyranny.
xxx
Sandie Angel :o)