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NaPoWriMo - 11
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Sometimes I fly like an eagle
But with the wings of a wren
Idling like an exotic visitor in someone’s garden
And three cats following your feet

All I must do is jump from the wagon
Like a tough song, actually
Reaching from the darkened middle distance
Reaching from the darkened middle distance
Idling like an exotic visitor in someone’s garden

Sometimes I fly like an eagle
Like a tough song, actually
All I must do is jump from the wagon
But with the wings of a wren
And three cats following your feet










Another one of serendipity: 7 lines taken completely at random from 7 books on my shelves :)) xx

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 Reviews of "NaPoWriMo - 11"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 25, 2010
the endeavor and the daring to be unique, yet muddle and endure through a bit of caution and mundane -- without ever losing sight of, or the thrill of soaring beyond our capabilities, "like an eagle with the wings of a wren" -- that's my story and I'm sticking to it -- loved it Kate -- peace and love be with you always my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 13, 2010
I too fly with wings but only in my imagination. Great write Kate.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
jump but don't fall
fall so you can fly
fly so you visit a garden
landing on your feet
in a dream of cats and eagles ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
interesting!

Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Well it turned out great! Not easy to do this Kate, you show your giftedness.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
"Sometimes I fly like an eagle
But with the wings of a wren"....I too do this,,,it brings one to new heights :)

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Kate, this is so clever and written with your own wonderful style.I love it!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
Three cats at one's feet is a very lucky omen. I often have six at my feet, so I feel doubly blessed.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
Once in a great while I fly like an eagle
Mostly I hang out with turkeys
My garden's a mess
My songs don't impress
Of those three damn cats
I made jerky
My wagon wheel broke
The wrens flew away
Can't really blame them
Their cage was a joke
My wings are done flapping
I hope you're amused
It was not my intention
Your poem to have abused

Sorry..the Dos Equis made me do it.
Patrick:-)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
Oh Kate, we all have good days and not so good days, but the days we have and it is ours for the taking, beautiful sentiments...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
There are many ways these lines can be interpreted Kate, but for me I have flown with those wings of a wren, only to find out they were the wings of a butterfly. Such is life I am told, and maybe someday I can be that wren on my up to being that eagle. Maybe someday. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
Very clever indeed, at least you're flying! Love this one Kate..pretty cool!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
I love this. Get twenty lines, and write us a pantoum! --Charlie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
Sometimes I fly like an eagle
But with the wings of a wren

To me, these lines "say" a great deal. Nicely done with a difficult task in my humble estimation. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
a free fall from space song to earth repeating
the key sentence,which gives it just enough
mystery to make it intriguing,along with the
three cats ;-) nice and Quirky Qate! ;-)lol


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
Sounds like a song, though to place it in a category, I couldn't because it spans all categories...e

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
you move past logic to truth, Kate, and it's wonderful...the band, as Sage says, plays its own composition and it sounds good to me

John

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
Jump, darkened, wagon, wings, eagle, wren, sometimes, idling, garden, middle, distance, actually, tough, exotic, song, fly, three, I, like, reaching, all, but, an, someone, visitor, a, do, the, with, distance, in, is, of , your and from, I think those words make up the whole of the verse. I'm lost for a comment.

George

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 11, 2010
The Steve Miller Band makes a good poetry subject with Burnside's NaPoWriMo - 11 - the cat's meow accompanied by guitar, keyboards, sitar and Lonnie Turner on bass guitar. This is no rough-and-tumble landing, Kate! It's smooth! I've seen birds with the strongest wings take a digger! Transcendent from this world and its experiences of serendipity, pleasurable things coming to us without our asking...they just fly into being like a pogo stick...be well.


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