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NaPoWriMo - 23
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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slap(p)

bang, -jack,
-up, -per

-happy, -dash,
her face, my thigh

-head, -stick,
it on, his back

and tickle:

here’s mud in yer eye!

:)) xx 

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 Reviews of "NaPoWriMo - 23"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Playful. Those last words stopped being playful in my mind, if I'm being honest. Cuz I know someone I'd love to splash with mud, but in a mean way:) Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Love puzzles. Charlie beat me to it. Patrick
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
..and there are seven more to go...

Georg

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
This is awesome! A word game, or possibly a found poem from a foreign lang-Eng translation dictionary. It's a list of idioms using the root word "slap" or "slapp". You take the first word (with or without the extra "p") and apply it to each word or suffix below for different idioms, as in "slap-jack" or "slap his back", etc... all except for the last muddy line, which is a good tickle anyhow. But leave it to Kreative Kate to jot them down in such a way that, as Karen says below, it looks like a romping free-for-all. This is a classic... how mere words become poems. I love this! --Charlie
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
Oh goodness, bet I am way off on this one but I see two playing, teasing, tickling and just enjoying a fun romp...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
yo ho ho and a bottle of rum -- cheers Kate -- peace and love be always with you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
Nice one Kate, I always enjoy your poetry!!!! Here's mud in your eye babe!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
and my eye can sure use it ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
Hmnnn now this is a puzzling one and I guess will be interpreted by each of us different...I know my pervy side wondered about the "her face, my thigh" line lol, keep em comint Kate.
Fee
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
I'd drink to that if I were a drinking man
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
;-) e
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