FIRST BATH, POST-OPERATIVE
Limbs bud bruise-hued
Monet clouds and water lilies;
russet-hair weed floats
half my length, like Shalott.
Wrinkled palms are shooting
stars, five-fingered fish
combing the whorls.
Foetal, I roll in bubbles upwards
from the white ceramic bed,
spout a tessellated Moby.
An aquarium
of softly-fanning tails
and striped thoughts
electric in colour
mouth their pretty Os,
come quietly to kiss
a healing benediction.
Somewhere beyond
there’s enquiry, gazing;
a gentle tapping on my glass.
Allen
I can see you as a lonzenge of light, turquoise and pink. Hope all your atoms are united in Defence of Your Realm, Kate! May Science and Art come together to bless you with their healing powers. Best wishes, kenny
In your poem you have given life to the mundane and reminded us to not take for granted the ordinary things of life.
Hope all is well in your world.
Cryssa :~)
Hmmm, a Moby shared the bath! fun, fun, fun!
I'm with Jon; I'm fascinated by the ending on this piece. Reminds me of my 4 days in the hospital after back surgery, because I sure did feel poked and prodded (under a microscope). I swore if one more person looked at the stitches on my belly (that's where they went in) I was going to raise heck. lol. Wishing you well. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Amor
(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.
Love and hugs, Diana...
and spouts "...a tessellated Moby"
what a cracking picture!
and in the goldfish bowl of poetry
she is exceptional and brilliant.
Kate, you're irrestible.
John
I'm so glad all went well for you, but I feel mystified not knowing what you had done. I went through most of your recent poems to find out and saw nothing. So I'm just praying that all will continue to be healed and you'll be on to your next adventure,soon! Your imagery is so enchanting, you amaze!;-)
Love and hugs,
Eileen
Regis
imagery. More than that, love to see you back.
P.S. Would love to see spout a tesselated Moby.
-gene.
So many gorgous mesmerizing images and lyrics and I was floating along until...you snapped your magical fingers!
Blessings,
Christine
A beautiful plea of innocence while at the mercy of others. VIVID1!
Most happy to see you on the mend.
George
wishing you all the best and a speedy recovery...
I send you my prayers and the gift of His Light...may He Shine upon your Soul and Bless You with Health...
love and peace...
Art....
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
(((gentle hugs))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Love and Blessings,
Christine