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Takin It Easy
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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TAKIN IT EASY

 

 

He appeared as a heat-haze

in the middle of high-desert

on Interstate 10, mouth agape,

shoulders stooped, sweat-clad,

oversized shirt unbuttoned

to the waist.

 

Eagles were blaring on XFM –

it’s a girl, my Lord, in a flat-bed Ford

slowin down to take a look at me –

and we were on the other side,

 

a shifting cloud of raucous speed

sending arc-tailed scorpions scuttling,

fat rattlers flinching from the fury

of our glinting, red Cadillac.

 

I had forgotten government notices

(warnings about hitchhikers)

nailed to posts at intervals

twenty miles or so back down

the road towards Fort Stockton,

 

but now, idly chopping at home

in my sun-drenched kitchen,

when Eagles play I think of him

again, stood there, and wonder

if he survived;

 

or, had things been otherwise,

who might have explained to

Houston car-hire the cause of the

wreckage returned to them:

 

Not me; not him; not men

from forensics head-to-toe

in white space suits,

 

combing through charred remains,

searching for passports, matching

teeth to Foreign Office records.

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 1, 2011
Howdy, girl! You can really feel the heat, and see the heat waves shimmer in this poem. In all, there is an intense feeling of an unrelenting, pent-up need for release. Even at the end, there is only an ominous guess. The tension still remains and lingers with the shivering reader. Warning duely noted. No more hitch-hikers for me (unless, of course, I know them).

I grew up a good 20 miles from ANY civilization at the bottom of a cinder cone, surrounded by desert, rattle snakes and sage brush. Summer heat is awful in the desert, and a few times I did pick up some lost wanderers who I still remember well. HOWever, there was this time we heard about some prison escapees that managed to hike to a farmers shed and make off with some ATV's (4-wheelers) and go cross-country for quite a ways, within about 8 miles from our home. Unfortunately for them, the police were well able to follow their tracks and take them back into custody. Good for you for following your instincts. --Charlie

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on February 1, 2011
The Hitchhilker's Guide to America. A galaxy of images you conjure here, wee Kate! The Eagles are a fantastic band. I was even humming one of their songs this morning before I came online. And yesterday, I was in a Gram Parsons groove: 'She! came from the land of the cotton, a world that was almost forgotten'; or, 'Oh, my land is like a wild goose/wanders all around everywhere ...' Then I learned LMP, Lisa Marie Presley, is now domiciled in England and has her third album coming out .... I can see many Elvis fans hitching around the south of England now looking for the Princess of Rock. Yes, Ma'am!

kenny

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 29, 2011
Oh boy, I did a fair amount of hitchhiking between 1970-1974. Not there however. Oddly though when I finally owned a ride in 1975 that flat bed Ford called my name (in my dreams). Patrick

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
Fort Stockton, Texas, I 10 the junction of mayhem and purgatory. When I close my eyes and visualize the area, your words carry me into a Rod Serling like genre. Perhaps the hitchhiker was Ted Bundy! The possibilities are endless. The fate of the good Samaritan too could have been a terminal affair as you describe,"matching teeth to Foreign Office records". A bit of mystery and then you introduce the "Eagles", "take it easy". Kate, this is entertaining to the very core my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
you are chopping with all that going on in your head...ouch. LOL
it's amazing how powerful songs are, taking us right out of time and into another dimension.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Kate, God knows that had you stopped and picked this man up it could have gone very wrong. Intuition and divine guidance spared you that angst. It is a good samaritan that does think twice about choices made. Trust me, you made the right choice. You are here among us and we love you. Thank goodness....

xo
Peace love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Phew, your poem and comment below are intense...played out like a movie that should not of ended, but maybe a blessing it did eh? great work..( I remember as a kid traveling across the desert with my parents and 7 siblings in an old truck like van, no air, had a metal container rigged that when you pulled the string, you got a breath of cool air,,imagine 10 people inhaling..lol..memeories indeed
blessing and love,
Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
You have recalled and very effectively reenacted the experience through your vivid verses, Kate. I can almost feel the desert heat as I read. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Beautiful images Kate. I have only been through one desert and that was the Western Desert in Australia. That is quite an expanse of land there. LOL. But I saw in the distance how the sun shimmered on the sand and if you had a mind to, could see images that weren't there. Mirages I think they call them. We were on our way to Perth, and we decided to drive. LOL. Not smart when crossing the Western Desert or so I found out. LOL.

Thank you for sharing this delightful piece.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
i live 5 minutes from I-10 in west los angeles and have traveled many times to the desert in search of something pure and simple. now i do seem to remember breaking down once and, thirsting for a drop to cool my parched tongue, seeing a red cadillac launch past me at warp speed; but i'm sure it's just coincidence. i did so enjoy this excerpt of non-fiction and the mirage/ heat like qualitiies of the desert certainly land a natural air of the mystique to the picture, which translates nicely into poetry. good one kate, take care.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Excellent writing sweet lady..Hugsss

Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Wow. You take us there ... brilliant, Kate.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
We have those signs pretty near my house, for there is a state prison in the area too...this brings back neat memories of hitchhiking in a time when people were safer or so it seemed...e

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Nicely done, Kate.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
Thanks, guys. "Well-crafted" and "intriguing" may be good in poetry, but in this particular instance, as this is a true happening - however incidental! - I'm itching for you to know that my hunch was that he was an escapee from a State prison a way back down the road... and, had we stopped to pick him up... well, who knows. On the other hand, although this happened at literal break-neck speed, you wouldn't have wanted to leave even a scorpion out in that intolerable heat and his chances of lasting long in it would not have been great. Hence the lingering unease. Glad you got something out of all this! :)) xx

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
Grim, disturbing, demanding, this fine write is all
of them, Kate, and whether in the mind or actual
it draws and holds with its power, suddenness
and final measurements.

John

Reviewed on January 26, 2011
shirt unbuttoned to his waist, flying scorpions, speeding cars......and wow. Suspenseful.
Morgan

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
What an interesting tale you hooked me on...excellent work!
Amor

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
I like this... it drew me in, I wanted to know more. Great write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
With the memories of the sixties and the open highway memories of hitchhiking and summer adventure you capture and draw the reader into the world of your choice...on a lazy southern afternoon when tragedy comes to earth. Excellant write and once again displaying your versatality Kate.
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
Provocative? Yes. Disturbing? Yes. All the things I'm sure you
intended in this beautifully crafted, riveting write. I like
it, and I like you so much I don't want anything to happen to you.
I wish you well, I wish him well. Keep on takin it easy. -gene.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
No guitar, mouth agape...pass! I'm just glad you're here in the sun-drenched kitchen to pen this awesome nuanced poem!!!
Hope you're feeling like dancing ;-) (so glad you got my package)
Be well,
Christine

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
Wow Kate...I thought and thought what incident, or who this could have been about. I am stumped in my quest to understand this enigmatic work. I tip me fedora to you.

Walt


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