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Warming
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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... even the Mermaids are getting fed up...!! K xx

 

WARMING

 

 

There’s too much water in the world;

 

You burn up breath and give back rain:

waterlogged words that make for

anchor-dragging going.

 

Who am I?  The sea tells me nothing. 

My mirrored face in ruffled waves

is tortured, not tamed. 

 

You think I cling to jaws

of heartless rocks by choice;

that I’m lure, not lament?

 

I must sing of a world where

even the whales will drown

and no Jonah can be safe,

but who among men understands?

 

So I’ll cut my hair, splice my tail,

don dark glasses, grave face.

 

I’ll walk wobbly onto your parched,

dry land; bask in hot sun and play cool.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Warming"
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on December 12, 2011
You forgot the tattoos. Patrick

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
Loved swimming about the parameters of this poem.

I dived under the surface meaning and thought I spied subconscious monsters of the deep: sea-witches in subterranean caverns, distressed mermaids pining for a life on dry land with a prince in hand.

She is older than the rocks she sits upon ... Pater said it!

Mona Lisa likes the sun-baked Tuscan countryside better than the Italian Riveria. Please excuse, I'm so wet! Hehe!

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
subtle strength and re.assurance......you build a true voyage.

Reviewed on November 5, 2011
hmmm, the spliced tail is a little nerve racking, but, you gotta do what you gotta do. This is good kate, ~ Morgan

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2011
Kate, A mermaid's point of view.

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 29, 2011
Uniquely delivered, Kate; I appreciate the perspective that you share via your verses here. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 27, 2011
You deliver with grace, charm and
slight tongue in cheek, Kate, but
the message isn't diminished in the least;
the mermaid, as all else, is endangered
by our wilful greed.
I love this poem!

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 27, 2011
...ITS MORE LIKE...'COOK' IN THE HOT SUN AND...WHAT A GHASTLY THOUGHT...OH MY! I LOVE YOUR IMAGINATION AND YOUR TREMENDOUS GIFT OF MAKING IT COME ALIVE WITH PEN AND PAPER. THANKS FOR SHARING, KATE...LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 26, 2011
this made me smile,and feel sad at the same time;-)Fine writing,kate!

luv,
et

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 25, 2011
so tuff to be a mermaid these days :)

Reviewed on October 23, 2011
Hi Kate! I especially love the first stanza... waterlogged words... how excellent... thank you for sharing...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
Kate, your prodigious tenacity and unrelenting optimism shine brightly beneath the expression of gloom -- survivors always adapt --"So I'll cut my hair, splice my tail, don dark glasses, grave face.. walk wobbly onto your parched, dry land, bask in hot sun and play cool", exude those marvelous qualities for this reader -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Janna Hill
Reviewed on October 22, 2011
Intriguing Kate.
:) Janna

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Love the line "my mirrored face in ruffled waves is tortured, not tamed"
always splendid poetry, Kate...
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Her lips,
a grimace
under that scaley smile...

--Charlie

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Under the sea, tragic atmosphere between the lines..splendid top notch poetry Kate!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
I totally agree with Jude's comment! One of your very best of late...bask in hot sun and play cool...great line!

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
a clever interplay if imagery, concept and sentiment ... so many excellent metaphors, i truly luv this piece ...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
So clever...So many layers to this whimsical yet powerful poem where, to me, the unconscious bridges consciousness!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
I'm not a global warming advocate, not to say the globe does not warm every few thousand years or more.. Be that as it may . . We all have our priorities.


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Ditto Andy....gotta love it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
"there's too much water in the world"

And there will soon be lots more, as more and more glaciers and icebergs now melt away. Better get a boat, Kool Kate.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
An outstanding write Kate
most enjoyable reading
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
A poem that speaks to me, Kate! (not exclusively, though!) I like the kind of "logic" used here: a poetic way of reasoning that appears clearly in a line such as "You burn up breath and give back rain". And, I was thinking... if something's happened to these iconic women, to our archetypes, then something must have happened to all women, global warming or not. Excellent writing!

Axilea

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
Don't mermaids grow legs outta water?

Shhhh, be still and quite and the sea will talk.

Descriptions such as heartless rocks... do convey a consequence of the way the world has become. Yet, ain't the world meant to end today?

Nice one, Kate.astrophic Kate.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
I am globally warmed by this poetic adventure...e


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