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Low Cloud Over The Pennines
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Awesome to have been able to spend a few days last week in the wake of some classic great artists and thinkers. A timeless landscape. xx

 

LOW CLOUD OVER THE PENNINES

 

 

Cloud comes comatose, breasting-troughing rugged peaks

like tall ships sailing in, restlessly craving shipwreck.

 

A curlew’s rising cadence conjures seas that breach

serried dunes of hills, slant as listing timbers.

 

As broiling clears to slow-rousing wakefulness

and dawn of definition,  mute tumble of stones

beneath my feet spread rumours of an arrival:

 

the dream-ravaged mariner who,

now freed from sleep’s parentheses,

in clasp of startled dalehead beck

lies suddenly there, collapsed at my feet;

 

tufted grass his tousled hair,

sneezewort his wild, staring eyes –

a day-tinged ghost who’s breathing still,

lips glistening salt, delirious with waves.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Low Cloud Over The Pennines"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 2, 2012
Lovely poetry, fine imagery; thank you for sharing this gift, Kate. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 28, 2012
Enjoyed the iimagery in this well composed piece
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on May 28, 2012
Well, here are the Pennines --- lines of strength and mystery. They call them the backbone of England those green hills of the north. Hope you're having a great time, Kate, in the dales and fells of Yorkshire. Don't forget to buy some Wensleydale cheese!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on May 22, 2012
Heathcliff, that ghost may have been Cathy?
Your depiction and descriptions are as exacting as the Bronte's.

Kid, you are so bloody good.

Reviewed on May 16, 2012
this is a wild ride of images, Kate! breast-troughing, freed from sleep's parenthesis, tufted grass of hair. A few day's away an you have awesome inspiration. this is GOOD. ;)

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 9, 2012
Now then see-thee, when did tha'womble up to these Northern climes dear lady?...and you didn't call ;(. Yes it is I, having sojourned through various worlds these last few years. I have decided to return to this particular one because I miss your wordsmithing Kate. I'm loving this timeless landscape that is close to my northern heart.

Paul ;)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 9, 2012
Your similes are sparkling as your sense of place. Although I do not understand them all, your writing ability shines through this wonderful little poem.

I'm looking at the portrait called, “sunrise on Emerald Bay (Corpus Christi, Texas)” and get a gist of what you are writing about.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
So much imagination in this marvelous piece!
You are soaring these days, just brilliant!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
A landscape that seems to be fond of meeting your imagination, Kate! I wish I could go there and enjoy the scenery. Especially when it's complemented by your imagination.

Axilea

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
stimulating and keenly crafted ,,, well worth its weight in pennies ;) glad you had a good time in the land of thinkers ... i can see its influence in your poem ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
Kate, You got me with the title..I immersed myself into your poem...thanks for taking me there...so glad you had a wonderful expierence on your marvelous trip :)
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 8, 2012
fine sense of the mystical, Kate,
an exploration of your imagination
more than the setting but using the setting
as launch..that old mariner lives on!

john

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
Excellant imagery and projection of your thoughts...well done Kate.
fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
I love your passages, they give me a clear and distinct picture in my mind where you have been...Utterly entertaining and delightful to read.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
Kate, Flowing like a ship guiding through
clear waters on the sunniest of days...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
Wonderful your holiday. Fabulous poetry Kate.

A mariner's tale of the sea so vivid
and inhanced with stalwart verses
in glistening waves to tell.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
A distinct and magical impression. Well done.

Reviewed by Alan Abrams
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
splendid cadence...interrupted by the focal element: the dream ravaged mariner...this poem is meant for the ear

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
. . . and washed ashore just for your to claim or ... phew!... hold your nose and reject. Still, a shower, shave and some Brut or whatever, and the Davey Jones reject-looking specimen might even look worth at least a tumble, you know, give it the old college try. Heehee Good to hear you had a fun AND exciting weekend mingling with like brilliant minds.


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