SHINE
Hidden, this thing has light unto itself,
buffed by nothing but its own reason;
sensing just a fragrant incense
and a soft infusing flame.
Then darkly it sparkles, tender-bedded
in its frail-flesh husk, each unhewn facet
shorn from the searing that is love-flood,
blood-rush, laval tingle-warmth of touch.
Each new-escaping beam renders its face a rose –
beauty-blushed, full-open –
or the quicksilvered watery passage
between mind’s shoreline and the moon.
Until, with splendour not bushel-buried,
it seeps through yielded breast and bone,
ignites the fiery fuse of nerve
to set its sacred diamond
in the ring of its own making,
bestowing its most precious shine
upon the jewel who wears its crown.
There are so many facets to this poem. It Shines in of itself. Love is like a shiny jewel fit for a queen or king bestowing upon them a crown of beauty and let me tell you your line between mind's shoreline and the moon is deeply moving and inspiring!!!
Great poem, now onto your part two..
Much peace, love and light,
Amber (Moonshine lol)
Axilea
Wonderful shining delightful poetry.
Lady Mary Ann
Love,
Sage
Regis
Always,
Deborah
certainly inspired by recent events..
'buffed by nothing but its own reason;'
how i wish for a personal and universal polishing
with reason-soaked cloth
as always, a joy!
john
You always let your readers glean what they will.
I Bow and Curtsey to you, Literary Lady.
Walt
love your use of light in this piece.
Budd
Happy Diamond Jubilee!
Ron
Phrases such as "in its frail-flesh husk, each unhewn facet," and "Each new-escaping beam renders its face a rose – beauty-blushed, full-open –"
I love the excellent wordplay, and I apologize for not being able to completely "get" it. Patrick is probably right, and it is love in some form or other.
fee