First Love (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)

Reviewed on December 11, 2004

Tommy, I'm really feeling this one. Oh, those memories of the mind, pictures in a photo albums, and any little keepsake. Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2004

Lovely...very romantic.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 20, 2004

Beautiful romance. You do these well. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

Beautiful poem, John. Well done. :o)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

A beautifully weaved poetic write, Tommy - finely composed!

Robert

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

Tender and painfully true, John. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2004

Tommy, it truly is amazing how the first love, forever burns deep within our soul. I want you to know my friend, this exceptionally well-written piece of timeless poetry, brought me to tears my friend. You have a remarkable gift for reaching inside, and shedding the light. Thank you for sharing it. Peace thru precious memories.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

Tommy this is one heavenly write...so beautiful the thought that love never dies but transforms in ways we simply can not fathom, until of course your poetry reminded us that love endures...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

Our first love is one we shall never forget - and this poem is proof positive that your first love resides in your heart and mind to this day. Beautiful and touching.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

Oh Tommy,
this one is so sad and touching.
It's the irony of fate that, once it is too late, we regret things we have done or haven't done and said.
Even if she is in heaven now, she will know what you felt for her, how true and honest your love was. I am sure about this.
Keep well.
Excellent write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

A very sweet and heart touching write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

moving poetry ...

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

Tommy, we never forget our first loves. No matter where life takes us, our first loves are forever with us.
Truly a beautiful and touching write.

Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

When my time on earth ends
And I leave for heaven
Sad I shall not be
My first love again I shall see

Truly hope you do, Tommy. First loves truly are a very special thing.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

Deep touching piece Tommy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 1, 2004

A beautiful touching poem for a Sunday morning here in South Africa. I am sitting in my office with a winter sun streaming through the window, listening to the sound of bird song and reading poetry. What a lovely start to my day.
Thanks
Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 31, 2004

This is so deeply touching Tommy!How sad that we all feel
such guilt at these times. It shouldn't be.
I'm glad you ended with hope and faith! Wonderful poem!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2004

I can remember my heart being broken into 10,000 little pieces..
Excellent write John.......