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Not a Good Night (Revision)
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OK, I think I'm getting close with this revision...



We’ve heard much of lighted tunnels
Welcoming arms reach from the past
Into oblivion our sand funnels
Until peacefully we breathe our last

That’s not the way I plan to leave
To give my soul without a fight
I’ll cling desperate to this mortal sleeve
My last will not be a good night

Old age flickers like a candle
And glorious deeds in shadows lie
Dying tears are hard to handle
a final question whispered, “Why?”

Before I run down the curtain
I’ll give that bucket a mighty kick
Though my demise is all but certain
I won’t go quietly or quick

Like sheep led to the slaughter
Their eyes blank with empty stares
Passively becoming fodder
Stripped easily of all their wares

While some may suffer accident
That makes their heart contrite
I won’t suddenly become penitent
My last will not be a good night

Soon the boatman will be beckoning
And death will finally have success
But it will be a bitter reckoning
I’ll not go peacefully to my rest

Copyright ©2004 Anthony Hall

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 Reviews of "Not a Good Night (Revision)"
Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reviewed on April 29, 2005
Anthony,

Great job! I hear the words and rhythm perfectly. Knowing you, I agree. You'll go kicking!

Cute baby update!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on March 31, 2005
A well written work. It gave me a chuckle because the philosophy expressed reminds me of my late beloved father. R

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

An enjoyable reading on thoughts of life and death, flowing under the rhythm of the drums of curiosity, entering the tunnel of imagination like a firefly through the shadows of doubt.

"Not a Good Night (Revision)" is a good poetic meal for the evening.

Healthy Springtime, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Revised, or unrevised, this is a powerfully potent piece
of work.
And I sure hope it is written about an allegorical figure,
and not about yourself!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
"always fight against the dying of the light"

perfect revision ...

Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
Well written!

Jennifer

Reviewed on March 21, 2005
outstanding, anthony! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
You're really working it, Anthony. Tweak, tweak, tweak. ~~Nordette ;-)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
You've done a FINE job with this...........
some parts made me smile.........
some say.......oh yeah

all in all.........I saw.......WOW!
pax A


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