An enjoyable reading on thoughts of life and death, flowing under the rhythm of the drums of curiosity, entering the tunnel of imagination like a firefly through the shadows of doubt.
"Not a Good Night (Revision)" is a good poetic meal for the evening.
Healthy Springtime, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Revised, or unrevised, this is a powerfully potent piece
of work.
And I sure hope it is written about an allegorical figure,
and not about yourself!
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Great job! I hear the words and rhythm perfectly. Knowing you, I agree. You'll go kicking!
Cute baby update!
Cynthia
An enjoyable reading on thoughts of life and death, flowing under the rhythm of the drums of curiosity, entering the tunnel of imagination like a firefly through the shadows of doubt.
"Not a Good Night (Revision)" is a good poetic meal for the evening.
Healthy Springtime, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
of work.
And I sure hope it is written about an allegorical figure,
and not about yourself!
perfect revision ...
Jennifer
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
some parts made me smile.........
some say.......oh yeah
all in all.........I saw.......WOW!
pax A