Nice work! It flows directly from your soul to the paper. I enjoyed it very much and will read more of your poetry.
Reviewed by Dawnamerra Hayes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
This piece reveals alot about your character. You have to be a very resilient optimist by choice. I appreciated the concise way you expressed yourself. One can only be concise when they have worked their way through alot of painful emotions to be able to speak it so clearly. Wonderful flow to your work as well that made it easy to read- not awkward or forced. Very nice.
Each day is a new opportunity to do what you have never dared to do. It is a fresh start and a new light on an old situation. This is a very positive and uplifting write, Michelle. Immaculately penned.
Take care,
Sherry
In a post-coup America, an Illinois farm boy is drawn into the resistance by his brother's death. Captured, he is given a choice: betray his friends, or the girl he loves will be lobotomized.
Take care,
Sherry
love Tracey xo
brought back to reality
enjoyed
Stunning achievement!!!!!!!!!! Most beautiful--there is hope, after all. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Love Tinka