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First Love
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First Love

First Love ( Haiku )
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You gave me a second look
That signalled our first love
Sweet nectar of heaven

Copyright Peter Paton 2004

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 Reviews of "First Love"
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on March 14, 2006
you've expressed it all with a few simple words.

Janet
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
Peter,

Haiku perfected - simply superb my friend!!

Robert
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
..indeed..:)

*V*
Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on July 25, 2004
Sweet and passionate!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Reviewed on July 6, 2004
What a sweet and lovely haiku!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Short but to the point
First love-never to be forgotten
Enjoyed this one
Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
No reality show needed here Peter!
Said short and very very sweet.

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
you caught the feeling of the moment ...
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Oh this one is beautiful....
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
That's the beauty of Haiku, short but sooo sweet in its content, as is this.
Write on Poet
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
One of the best haikus I have read!
Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Sweet Haiku.

Amy
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Beautiful romance.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
(((peter)))

LOL at bill's review--i agree, make her purr :)

tender, delightful, beautiful write! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
And then came another look and another look and Peter was 'smitten'
by a very sweet kitten. Make her purr Peter, make her purr. Bill
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Beautiful tender write!!

Love Tinka
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