Like the wet whisper of a breeze...the angel's touch must cause the hairs to stand and salute at the neck, the temple...the flesh. You describe this so well. Your poetry has volumes whispering between the lines.
Excellent!
Susan
And such a cute and innocent photo on your bio :) LOL
No, seriously, this is very sensual and erotic, but
done in such a beautiful and tasteful manner, (now what
have I just said there??) ;0 Lol
Peter, this is an exceptionally well-penned sizzling descriptive piece of primal passionate poetry, Poet. An absolutely stunning effort. Thanks for sharing it.
Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
LOL....very good Peter...Angel's Touch is in your nature.
This is a sentimental and epic story about a young man, injured in the Viewnam War, who returns to Dallas, Texas, in 1964, and begins rebuilding his life. Set against the rock and roll era of the early 1960’s, when casual sex and recreational drugs w
Very well written.
Excellent!
Susan
Love Tinka
Strong compassion here in this romantic prose penned with poetic craftsmanship - extra fine write!
Robert
And such a cute and innocent photo on your bio :) LOL
No, seriously, this is very sensual and erotic, but
done in such a beautiful and tasteful manner, (now what
have I just said there??) ;0 Lol
OK Peter, very well written.
hugs and love
Elga
Amy
Enjoyable and intriguing poetic challenger.
At 21:06 GMT.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
much passion in these well written lines, peter...i know what's on your mind *grins*
great job, poet!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)