Cool Blue Eyes (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Janet Bellinger

Reviewed on March 12, 2006

Beautifully done. What a welcome for that "new and vibrant seed - a living Child of God."

Janet Bellinger

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Lori said it best........Simply beautiful.....

Some lovely work at your den........ty, Dani

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

Dear Peter,

Beautiful sensual and spiritual poem.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 27, 2004

A lovely sentimental piece. I enjoyed this, Peter.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

I can only repeat what Nordette Adams so brilliantly noted...

a grand write indeed...

vesna :)

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Beautiful, soulful, passionate write. Bravo!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Do cool blue eyes fit with such hot feelings towards another person?
Very passionate write here.
Good job Peter
Love
Amira

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Love the true romance, and spirituality in this write :-)

Reviewed by Elaine Carey

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Exquisite!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Now my sweetheart knows , that our pact is an eternal rose

A marvelous Ode to True Love, and to your Soul Mate, Peter.

Well Done!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

This is the way it was meant to be, Peter. An appealing write.

"your mirror image dovetails with mine" This line reminded me of the following information: Mirroring each others movements, according to psychologists and anthropologists, is one of the first signs that two people have bonded probably on a sexual/romantic level before they actually become physically intimate. On the darker side, just an FYI here, the manipulative can fool you into thinking they've bonded with you by intentionally mirroring your movements, i.e. reaching for their drink when you reach for yours, subtlely tilting their heads to the right when you tilt yours to the left. Had to add that note of caution in case someone young and impressionable was reading this like some women read "Cosmo" and assume, "OMG, he loves me!" LOL

Now, if they use your poem as a guideline, they're on to something. ;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

spirituality, romance and creation all vibrant in this passionate and inspired poem ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Another splendid offering of spiritual beauty that
sears heart and soul with passion and love!

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Peter, "Cool blue eyes" ...love those promises set in stone...

Amy

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

No blue in this poem,it is all rosey and bright,great work Peter!
I loved this one.
Best wishes
from
kay.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Peter -

An outstanding and simply beautiful piece - great title!

Robert

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Love is the eternal rose indeed! Clarity with love words. Much enjoyed your emotions here.
Susan

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Simply beautiful.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

I have experienced that kind of love and it only comes once in a life time. Thank God for blessing you with a wonderful women.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Peter, I�m quite sure with this magnificent declaration she�ll appreciate your devotion my friend. Excellent work. Take care.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

(((peter)))

if she doesn't like this, I do...and that's what counts LOL

most precious, beautiful, romantic poetry...siiggghhhh

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

i'll bet she adores this...so much promise

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Precious and timeless!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

beautiful write, peter! well done! thanks for all your kind reviews; they are much appreciated!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D