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Symmetry in Chicago
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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The larch tree whispers an unfolding song
connections from an ancient time
sultry winds rustle the Illinois leaves
and stirs my heart to deeper things in Chicago
robin redbreasts dart inquistively across the lawn
and the spirit of Cherokee indian resonates through the halls of time

kindred souls together linked by bond of friendship
as we shared precious moments divinely assigned
garden created with geometric design
consummate outlines with professional pride

A mother's love enshrined for all to see
symbolised in tokens of splendid
degree
loving kindness opens every door
Mother Mary with a heart of gold

morning breaks to the sound of exquisite bird song
dawn chorus of symphony sound
salmon pink sun slants across the pond
misty ambiance envelopes us all around
and my love is forever yours


 

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 Reviews of "Symmetry in Chicago"
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Lovely images in this poem.

Janet

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on July 2, 2005
Splendid write. The picture you have painted makes me want to visit Chicago. Best wishes.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
I find these verses most captivating of my soul, Peter. Thank you for sharing this lovely offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
It's always good to see you post, Peter.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 26, 2005
A truly wonderful poem, Peter - and since I'm from Chicago, I liked it even more!

Reviewed on May 25, 2005

"Symmetry in Chicago" brings gold to the treasure of Poetry.
This poem was written with diamond letters, and its closing lines
are flawless brilliant cut.

Your absence was noticed, Sublime Poet!

Healthy Creative Long Life.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
extremely well written ... luv the last verse ...

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
How beautiful, Peter! You must be in heaven!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Beautiful poetry Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Your symbolic words resonate and drip like syrup in Vermont to sweeten a spring day.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
I visited a very close friend of mine just on the outside of Chicago. You have a beautiful state, that I am not surprised would bring about such a beautiful poem. I do hope to return again to feel the history of your land again.


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