Veil of Wisdom (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Peter,
This section of your poem reached me.
"We struggle and toil incessantly

for our very existence and survival

thinking that we know it all

but there is a vanishing point

when knowledge comes to an end

and the mysterious comes into clear view"

This is excellent visual and spiritual affirmation.
Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

This reminds me of one of my favorite thoughts and meditations:

"Get wisdom, get understanding: forget it NOT; neither decline from the words of my mouth. Forsake her not, and she shall PRESERVE thee: love her, and she shall KEEP thee. Wisdom is the PRINCIPAL thing; therefore get wisdom: and with all thy getting get understanding. EXALT her, and she shall PROMOTE thee: she shall bring thee to HONOUR, when thou dost EMBRACE her. She shall give to thine head an ornament of GRACE: a crown of GLORY shall she deliver to thee."

Proverbs 4:5-9 KJV 1611 :)

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Very uplifting and encouraging, brilliant for sure!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Peter, our Den Nostradamus! Veil of Wisdom is in tune with the rhythm of the universe and meets the qualifications for inspiration and wisdom.

Sage

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

war and hatred will be vanquished at a stroke

Now that is something to look forward to, Peter.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Your brilliant poetry is so reflective of your faith and the truth of Creato's plan! Splendid Peter!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

an excellent prophetic delcaration of the powers of redemption ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Brilliant didactic write Peter.
LOL the pic looks like margret thatcher...

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Dearest Peter,
We both wrote wisdom poems... synchronicity; although each very different!!
Love & Light Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Wonderful write, Peter! Great photo.!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Excellent write, Peter; stunningly presented! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Michael Wells (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Reads like a story from the bible

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Peter,

A stunning composition, once again, majestic with God's Word. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

this one resounds with "the word" as you cobine bible teaching with thoughts of your heart. Well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Reads like a prophecy, Peter. Thank you for sharing your powerful convictions and sentiments. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

thank you Peter.

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

True, truest knowledge, Peter...Such beauty in every word...

((Love & Prayers, Dove ))

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

GLORY! I SAID, GLORY!...Worthy is the Lamb Who was slain, to receive power and riches and wisdom and glory and honor and strength and blessing! Be it unto you a sacrifice of praise, YAHWEH! There is none like you, Blue Angel, no, not one...... in one accord, His Love ~ rhonda

Reviewed by Hariharan Balakrishnan

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Good sentiment. Shares contemporary angst at the way the world is going. More power to your pen.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Right on the money Peter! Your perception of faith is what all man should strive to identify with. With fire and brimstone preaching so very many just turn their heads. Your subtle reasoning serves the purpose much better.
Peace and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

I don't think I would live to see that day
Untill then, it is the wicked that rule this earth and we are the blinded ones.
Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

JJ said about all there needs to be said. JJ? Who the hell is JJ?

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 25, 2006

Splendid write.