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Broke Me In Two
by Anniemoh Ohio → (All Poetry by Anniemoh Ohio)
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The only way to find the light at the end of the tunnel is to develop the courage to take a chance...


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Twelve years battered but not every day

The pain carried on nonetheless

Emotionally shredded like slaw

I bore a gloomy canvas of black and blue

Spoke novels with your fists like a demon

Your cowardly end to a problem

But I too was a coward

For I hid your indiscretions

Lockbox closed to the public

Until the day you broke me in two

For the chip that you bust carried into the wind

Safely landed, harbored onto a new shore

Life now lived without fear

Welded to another who speaks with words

And not the spineless craze

Of a person without heart or soul



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 Reviews of "Broke Me In Two"
Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on July 23, 2004
This is well written and very emotional..unfortunately I can relate, but thank goodness you found somewhere away from that.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2004
Exceptional write, Poet. Abuse in any form is WRONG, especially when it becomes physical, although verbal abuse can be just as devastating to the human spirit if not more so. Whenever it happens it’s best to have the abuser arrested immediately; tossed in the clink and prosecuted to the fullest extent of the law. It always saddens me deeply whenever I hear about it.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
Excellent write.
Be proud of yourself that you managed to put an end to this.
Also enjoyed your bio.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
powerful write

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 15, 2004
I can relate, was in this situation in my marriage.
This is an excellent portrayal of the cowardly
bullies who call themselves macho men!
Glad you're out of it!Well done!


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