Plans mapped perfectly Fall prey to the uncertainties of life Day-to-day activities Suddenly altered A single event interjects Her wrath of destruction Succumb to the misfortune Or stand strong against the storm Fighting tooth and nail Against her rabid claws Reconstruct and follow a new path And sway like a palm Flexing in the breeze Climb over the barricades Conquering one by one Forever focusing on the horizon And her infinite possibilities
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Reviews of "Never Give In"
Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2004
Confidence is a sign of courage and inner strength. It is a rare quality. I enjoyed this because it shows independence and stamina to face obstacles and whether you win lose or draw, you are ready to accept the reinforcing consequences of your actions. Good Job!
Chuckie
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Good advise.
Keep on moving forward, don't look back.
You'll manage.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
An exemplary demonstration of concentration was needed to pull this magnificent piece together so well! Thank you for sharing it.
Chuckie
Keep on moving forward, don't look back.
You'll manage.