She sits..
Bound by the twins:
Grave duty and obligation,
Sleek and smooth
Not a hair out of place
She visits the Vicar
Sipping her tea
Listening to the latest news
With unfailing courtesy
Hands folded calmly
She speaks with the ladies of her circle
Murmuring a word here and there,
A small smile curving her full mouth..
A queen,
She dispenses equal parts courtesy and charm.
A cool remote figure
Beyond reproach
The westering sun
Sinks slowly
Into the warm embrace
of Mother Earth
Slipping the latch on the old oaken gate,
She runs on bare feet into the arms
Of the darkening woods
And their secrets…
Loosing her hair as she flies,
Laughing.. freed of the dull days bondage
Her small body begins to throb
With remembered ecstasy
Her slender arms, tremble
As she frees her body of it's clothing
Light silken things tossed
Like windswept leaves, carpeting the forest floor
Her slender fingers caress her small upturned breasts
The cooling breeze
Brushing her silken skin
Her hips swaying
To a primal song
He watches hidden
Her slender body dancing
Thighs running wet with desire
A wild lass, creature of bracken and moor.
Slowly he rises
His red gold hair
Stirring across his broad shoulders
One large hand
Stroking his engorged shaft
Slowly he nears her
Scenting her arousal
In the cool evening air
Her fingers twined in the dark shadow
Between her creamy thighs
He hears her soft gasp
As he comes up behind her
Pulling her against his hot damp flesh
His rough warriors hands encircling her waist.
Long moments pass
As they sway soundlessly together
Until they sink to the warm earth
Mute with love and longing
His hard mouth closes suddenly on hers
Eyes intent as he fills her being with fire
Watching her darkening eyes
Grow huge with need
She trails her sweet tongue down his chest
Tasting his sun salted skin
Her fingers teasing his damp pulsing groin
Hearing the soft groans escape his cunning mouth
Slowly she cradles his swollen testes
Hefting them in her tiny hand
Her mouth sinks on him
Her tongue scribing circles over his damp tip
With exquisite care
Calloused fingers part her tender pink flesh
Opening her to his hungry eyes
Her body shuddering
Feeling his warm breath
Whisper across her wet slick
Velvet
He clasps her soft hips and pulls her sweetness into
His greedy questing mouth
Tongue tasting probing
Every fold and crevice
Her soft husky moans
An erotic melody
Gently he lifts her and lies her down softly
His hands cradling her head
Dark eyes glazed with passion, lock
As he enters her liquid silken depths
Her hips lift, legs wrapped round him
Mouth slack with desire
She joins the primal dance
Meeting him thrust for thrust
She clasps him like a warm wet glove
He rides her...
Wild
Pouring his hot seed
His soul
Into her dark mystery
Hearing her cry out his name
As she comes
Tidal passion sweeping over her helpless, wet body
He feels one long moment of
Utter love
Spent,in the gloaming
They lie enfolded
Sanctuary of grace and peace
Unshackled by their love
Candida,
I began to read this piece the other day, fainted, now have returned with a fan! Yes, the type used in church in the South on hot summer mornings, to fan away the......wow girl, all I can say is yes, it was hot! And damn good! Well written ...from now on though sister, im bringing a fan with me just in case.....cus Damn!......I smile in retreat...damn good solid piece...youre a gifted writer..Candida
Rod
"Tha's prettiest lass as ah've ever sin," (well that's the expiurgated version) Put me in mind of Oliver Mellors and Lady Chatterly but there were echoes of Heathcliffe and Kathy in some references.
Eroticism is quite difficult to get just right but you have succeeded brilliantly.
Whoa, Candida what a classic erotic write! Exceptional says this old romantic guy, to this young Beautiful maiden. I am putting your name on my tracker.
(Breathless) Oh my Candida! This one is so hot.....made my heart pound with the sensual images that flooded my mind. You are a very gifted writer and I love the way your mind works.....smile Need a cool shower after reading this.......smile
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2003
Candida! Que maravillosa amor! You put a lot into this and I got a lot out of it. Bill
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
I began to read this piece the other day, fainted, now have returned with a fan! Yes, the type used in church in the South on hot summer mornings, to fan away the......wow girl, all I can say is yes, it was hot! And damn good! Well written ...from now on though sister, im bringing a fan with me just in case.....cus Damn!......I smile in retreat...damn good solid piece...youre a gifted writer..Candida
Rod
Eroticism is quite difficult to get just right but you have succeeded brilliantly.
Jenni
Reindeer
~Nikki~
Leland
Tony:)
Mister
very classy,....
Peg
So primal and free this is....great!
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*