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A Mothers Love
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
  
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A child never loses the hunger for a mothers love...



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What did you see


as you gazed in the mirror?


Perfumed and painted for your nights on the town?


 


Who did you see when you looked at your child


and told her you hated the moment of her birth?


which demon lurked in the recesses of your mind


to haunt you this way?


 


Who were you striking when you beat her....


a tiny child


who loved you?


 


What shriveled your cold cold heart so...


that you could not see


the face of love and longing


That hungering little heart


gazing back at you


 


Did you drink so deeply of the bitterness in life


your mind embracing the pain


that you denied yourself


the love


your child tried giving you so freely


 


You tried creating another you..


a creature of anger and hate


Barren of love and compassion


Guess again...


You failed..


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 Reviews of "A Mothers Love"
Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
*Did you drink so deeply of the bitterness in life
your mind embracing the pain
that you denied yourself
the love
your child tried giving you so freely***

So honest,truthful and blunt. Loved every word.



Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on November 5, 2003
You wrote my childhood in so few, excellently strung echoes, Candida: a passage of life vowed to be changed, to be risen above, and I did. But, as you say, we neve lose the hunger. My mother has been dead for over 18 years, yet there are times when I find myself wanting to call her, tell her of an exciting event in my life: not that she would have been impressed but I always hoped she would be touched. Visit me some time.

Love in Christ~~
Bonnie Q
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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on November 4, 2003
strong emotions here

Reviewed on November 2, 2003
Damn straight "you failed"!!! Rise above the ashes, m'lady...and then DANCE in them. :) Excellent poem!

Jools :)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Realistic poetry!!!

Reviewed on October 29, 2003
I loved this, my top fave, Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Applause!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
:O <Me with my mouth hanging open>
WOW Candida this is a ~Z~ has said "truth personified", what a painful, touching and very deep write!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Candy, this is truth personified! Excellent touching and deep write...~Z~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 29, 2003
Candida, excellent poetry. Loved the ending.


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