Stare wide-eyed at the
sheer size of it
glistening in the sun
moisture dripping down
to the base
Gleefully, I take a
lick, the flavor flooding
my senses, sweet liquid
quenching my hunger.
Another tentative sample
pure delight as I gorge
myself shamelessly
capturing every drizzle
on the tip of my tongue.
Faster, faster, lick
all around the base
fluid overflowing..damn.
I sit back covered, the
sticky essense oozing
down my chin.....
Eating ice cream on
a hot day's not such a
great idea afterall
Quite a naughty write...Lol...that borders on the sensual and erotic..
Tantalizing and humourous composition..
Peter
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
Hehe.
I actually expected the ending to be different.
Sweet write.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Danielle, this powerful use of suggestive phrases worked extremely well, and it helped deliver and bring to life this magnificent piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing your talent, Poet.
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
The songs and art in this book are about our collective emergence after the pandemic and trauma of the last few years - comprised of 5 collections: World as Refuge, Where We Live, In Our Hands, Rhythms of Change and What We See & Sow.
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Tantalizing and humourous composition..
Peter
I actually expected the ending to be different.
Sweet write.
Love Tinka