Sorry in advance for these...I seem to be having a difficult time making what I WANT to write come out eloquently..these were just a little bit of fun :)
Sun shines brightly on
golden hair tied with ribbons.
Head turns and curls bounce.
Fingers splayed across
hot flesh...kisses drift over
wet, lush, hungry lips.
Wind whispers through its
leaves. Birds within sing their songs.
I sleep in her shade.
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Reviewed by Robert Fullerton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
I needn't ask for pictures, you have painted them..flawlessly..
Thank you for the fun read...Bob
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2004
Why would you be sorry for these beauties? My favorite one is:
Fingers splayed across
hot flesh...kisses drift over
wet, lush, hungry lips.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2004
these were fun.
now if i was you I'd take my favorite image from each and make one poem out of them (adding more of course.)
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Thank you for the fun read...Bob
Fingers splayed across
hot flesh...kisses drift over
wet, lush, hungry lips.
now if i was you I'd take my favorite image from each and make one poem out of them (adding more of course.)
miniature word pictures, beautifully painted!
Welcome back!!
Love Tinka