words flowing over and around me bringing thoughts to life breathing into fantasies of you and me... lights turned low me straddling your lap pulled into tight embrace barrier of lace between flushed skin pressed together in heat... your fingers sliding up my legs under my skirt... my lips a breath away from yours lean in for a kiss and a bite of your lip before I suck the sting away... hands run up my body caressing my breasts fisting in my hair pulling me back... lips roaming my neck... arm locking around my waist laying me down... hand trails up my legs stroking my skin... fantasies cease and I give in as I allow your words to seduce me
This poem is a beautiful portrayal of the power of words. How does words seduce and make us feel the things we could have felt only in reality...The expression is very sensational and muse powerful...(also very hot!!) :-)
Masood
Your loving words give hope to those who can't find the right ones to describe - even in the head - what this is all about. You've put many past the line, and they are indebted to you. I'm confident that they are thanking you. Keep writing good stuff... - Bill
Hot, hot, hot, is only way to describe this.You Danielle have taken the intense passion of love and lust and served it up like the main course at a facy French restaurant. So beautifully written makes the reader feel like he is in the room guiltily watching your loves embrace.
Very descriptive and sensual...
Doc
Masood
EDL
Felix
...Michael
Love Tinka
Have a good night;-)...
Love,
Eileen
Great write!