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Kept Away
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I'm half asleep, sorry if this makes no sense...just a little something running through my head that I wanted to get down before I lost it completely ;)
I see you watching through the glass Words drifting to me on a breeze Beckoning, calling for me to ask Get on my knees to beg and please I cannot feel your barest of touch My skin's gone numb I'm afraid But I fear I ask too much I've forgotten how the game is played I can watch and I can listen I can give in and obey But you won't see the tears that glisten In my eyes when you walk away So look at me through the glass Play your games then leave me be Sadly the one thing I long to ask Is the one thing I will never receive

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Reviews of "Kept Away"

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

Well, if I compare this to what goes through my mind before I fall asleep - it is absolutely perfect. Sad though....
Cheer up girl. I received your note re exhibition. Could you give me details (i.e. place, date?). Maybe I could come by and have a look.
Love
Amira

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

Haunting write Danielle, excellent!

~Carole

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

I don't know so much about making no sense. This made perfect sense to me. A real plea from the heart and so effective. You write expressively Danielle.
Chanti

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

I have been there and felt those same emotions so know intimitately the pain and longing for which your poem speaks. Well done Danielle.

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

I agree with leah and I would run not walk away from this relationship. Sad

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

Haunting write that I can relate to!!

Love tinia

Reviewed by Leah Wilson

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

So very haunting! I could feel your frustration. The wanting and never having. I hope that if this is a true to life situation, that things will get better for you. Don't let anyone use you, Danielle. Love, Leah

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on August 19, 2005

Then find someone from whom you don't have to 'ask' it - that is the best love - the kind that never has to 'ask.' The kind that always 'gives,' without having been asked. -- Jeff

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hehe..I was trying to be clever with this one :p but I'm thinking that clever-Danielle is an oxymoron lol enjoy ;)

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***this is NOT something that happened recently, but it''s been in my dreams and I need to get this out of my head. Please forgive the content.

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