This is for a friend going through some troubles..I won't give any details as it's not my business to share them, but I want her to know I care wether she wants me to or not.
How do I say what I need to say When the words that you hear Get all twisted and torn away You won't let me get near Won't let me in You can't explain why Please, God, don't let it begin I know where you're going tonight Now you're praying again But He can't hear your cries Watch you take a hit and then You've got me dying inside You saved me back then Pulled me out of my hell Now it's begun again Only this time you need my help You push me away Say I don't understand But I tell you today Leaving isn't part of my plan
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Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2005
I've been there on both sides of this poem in a way... you have a way of writing that's easily relate-able, if that's even a word... ;)
Very passionate write and it is good that you are prepared to be there for your friend, however sometimes all we can do is standby and let them know we are near and we care.
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"When the words that you hear
Get all twisted and torn away"
Very good!
(And soothings to your friend)
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