the shadow blighting out your sun
lingers over me now
trapped in your sea of broken dreams
and I'd gladly drown in it
if you'd give me but a chance
but I'm hidden in that wasteland
where lost hopes lie in wait of rediscovery
and you can't save that which
you're just too blind to see
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Reviews of "Oblivious"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
A lost love poem that stands its ground, it isn't all woe is me, there is so comeback in your face there, and I like that . ..
this is definately stunning poetry with such force of meaning as to strike right to the heart before the brain...well done and good to see you back...
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just me, Regis