I woke up this morning and there was nothing but air to breathe and bread to eat
Coffee hot and black an empty feeling in my heart a void in my brain
Sure, chores await tasks to be done errands to be run
But, a blank page a blank screen no words yet to be seen vast possibilities asleep
Seize the moment and create?
Start the flow of thought?
Other worlds to be wrought?
Nothing, thin air, tomorrow will you be there?
Will I find the strength to wreak havoc once more?
Will I play with the void?
Maybe. Maybe not.
Nothing is a wonderful start.
Nothing is the end.
copyright 2004 RDP
superb piece..loved it ..saved it..ty
Vesna :)
Thank you!
Safi
Love, JC xoxoxo
I have learned and enjoyed the reading of a poetic grand.
"Floating thoughts" delivered a building message.
I salute You, Sublime Artist of the VERB!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Bob H
well done!
"Floating Thoughts" is an outstanding write, to say the least - it flows beautifully ... well-penned!
Robert
Ahhhh...an experience most poets can relate to...beautifully
penned.
Carmen :-)
Excellent write with a great ending.
excellent write
William
Joy and sunshine
HH
Start the flow of thought?
Other worlds to be wrought?
Lovely and compelling composition of high quality and craft
Love
Peter
Scored a bullseye!
SMILES LP
Nothing is the end."
Good lines, Gina.
In a sandwich it's mostly what's in the middle that counts. At least I like to think that way.
Best reagards,
Leland
I suspect that you will, Regina!
Excellent!
TRASK
Love Tinka