Okay, here's the thing...I'm glad I read all of your work before I read this one because alone it is simply simple. But contrasted with your other poems I have faith that it is written that way by design and not because you don't know what makes a good poem. I think that may read as an unintended insult but I gave the poem a high rating, so I hope that tells you it's not meant that way. In any case, you know it's cute. You don't need me to tell ya!
This poem is simplicity itself and yet says so much in such a refreshingly original way. It requires more than average talent to create a work of art from the basic ingredients of simplicity of language and rhythm, together with fresh, original images free of clichés.
So, congratulations, Regina, and thanks for posting.
Fleeing from a scorned past,Catherine Merit struggles with her failing medical practice and a rich man's obsession of her.Book Four in the Indignities Series
Based on the memoirs of a Pearl Harbor survivor. Letters from two pen pals take the reader on a journey into the past, a past where nightmares came true, and when hatred reigned.
Your poetic style is superb - always!! Wonderful!!
Hugs,
Lance
Nicely done..Best of luck on your books, well done!
Rodney Evan Bohen
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Victoria
So, congratulations, Regina, and thanks for posting.
Good job.
Very beautiful....
Nice to see that you too love angels...!
And thank you for your kind comment's...
Yours truly...
Gilles...
This is very up lifing..
Exactaly what we all need
right now.
Thank you
Trixie