A loving note
True words that stoke
Fire in mind
Fire, the alchemy kind
In words that express
But can’t replace
Knowledge
Gained from the experience rhyme
Of our life worth breathing
Of mistakes to learning
And reliving
Revamping till getting it right
Bringing some understanding of mystery elixir
Liberating freedom from trouble and hype
Easing burdens; soothing spirits; healing hearts
Observing the dark and the light
Non-reactions and flexibility
Steadily riding lows and light
Can’t be swayed
Distractions colluding, seeming to set us up, to swipe
By our minds be strong
On our own path beacon along
Living life as a Loving Note
Singing, celebrating, generating benefiting vibrations
Bowing only to that which is good and bright!
Your gentleness and sincerity of heart comes pouring out in your exquisite words..
And sometimes we come to an end of words...that's where true love resides...:)
I always come away from your Den refreshed and re-energised !
Love, blessings and hugs
Peter
reminiscent of Emily D...Love, Lin
A superb summation of your creation, Suzie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
Regis
I love that last line.
Hank
SpecTACular write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
eT
Engaging, inspired write, Suzie.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
TRASK
Love Tinka
A ticket to the cosmic-ontological of the "I" with full course meal to be served at the VIP Lounge before departure was delivered
within a rose envelope of "A Loving Note".
I have enjoyed the reading of "A Loving Note".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Felix
Sage