First attempts at cinquains. I can’t help sending unity messages … they flow through this way. I understand it’s not traditional poetry … but the time is now to bridge and send messages of love in any way we can. Thank you dearly for contemplating.
I love the humans in this world, who need more love Why do we fight our families at all?
Good God Loves creation Needs divine salvation From human misdeed and tantrum Misgiven Teach us Show us the way To create better days Where love and care are joys to bear Others The Light Enlighten night Hold the beacon of love Radiate our hearts in healing Delight
To care Takes compassion The mind need not ration Portions spare needed for all. Takes Passion!
You inject much needed Hope, Unity and most of... Universal Love in this scintillating series of cinquains..
You are expanding your range with grace and aplomb !
Inspiring and true, God is definately needed to be called into the world picture and his forgiveness and help asked for. Beautiful set of versus Susan,
Fee
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Passionate pleas well expressed in these cinquains...damn good stuff for first attempts. Well done Suzie. Panda :)
Rousing good topic for these great cinquain, Suzie! Unity is the only true way for harmony and we need to spread and seek more of it today than ever!Thank you!...
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Regis
Warm love Tinka
Love you, Suzie-Q!
Big Hugs, Rhonda
You inject much needed Hope, Unity and most of... Universal Love in this scintillating series of cinquains..
You are expanding your range with grace and aplomb !
Love and Prayers
Peter
Love,
Taylor
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Fee
Love,
Eileen