Oh, this feeling’s no good I see That man seems sent to trouble me
Wait, why not look at the inner me See what’s made of my soul food tree
Sweetness of giving, rich nectar from forgiving Loving and supporting, hoping God would do the walking
We are all human, and we grow, it’s clear Into our own good fragrance of splendid idea
To find liberation from within, a web From lifetimes and lifetimes of creating karma, our bed
Our freedom is in each other Intrinsic it’s so One can’t do without our brother All beings must go With liberty in step Our minds freely flow Connected And free In life To and fro
I love your Flowwwww Suzie! YOu say it Right! and Proud! YOur words and heartfelt feelings inspire! Thanks Suzie! It's been awhile, I miss reading your heart! PEACE! and Light! WArm HuGs,Sheeeoxxo
Though not your usual form I like this new path and direction you have chosen. It is a noble write and the message, images and power of it are all intense and strong. You did this one true justice Susan,
hugs,
Fee
Regis
Love Tinka
"Liberty in step"
Well constructed and enjoyable
poetic narrative!
Thank you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Most intelligent clever write, loved how it changed course midway through..
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
hugs,
Fee