Genuine love and self-discipline Go deeply hand in hand One without the other The mind is unable to understand Life without either two Denotes love living on imbalanced land
True love is freedom When these handmaidens subsist Without them, fleeting love goes falling in an abyss
Let’s muster up the courage To live this life and give Find within the qualities That allow good hearts to bridge
Mind the gap That enables flack to harmfully pour through Find the kind that seeks Divine in Loving Living And You
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Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
Love must always be nurtured and protected from all the "flack" that is always trying to pour through. "The wolf is always at the door..." -Good message!
~Butch
The Truth!
We must find the dicipline in each of us
To love wholly and truthfully!
Hope to see you soon on my corner of the den my friend~
Enjoy! All your Holidays in WArmth and Wisdom and Cheer!
WArm HuGs,Sheeexoox
I love the education part of your masterpiece. It's so true...love isn't love without being genuine and having self discipline. Your words are so very true. Great write my friend. Jim
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
~Butch
The best kinda of love of them all
Divine Love !
Superlative poetry..;-)
Love and Hugs
Peter
We must find the dicipline in each of us
To love wholly and truthfully!
Hope to see you soon on my corner of the den my friend~
Enjoy! All your Holidays in WArmth and Wisdom and Cheer!
WArm HuGs,Sheeexoox
Love Tinka
Love, Taylor
Brett
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