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The diamond was rough
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The limbo of love
Crazy stuff
That keeps one on neither side
One step forward
Takes ten steps back
Moving from side to side

To settle here
Or settle there
Could leave you in despair
To take the bull by its horns
Would be easier to repair

The epitome of love
It’s all good stuff
No longer by and bye
Take the ups with the downs
I
n lengthening your stride

Yes, indeed the diamond was rough
Before it smoothed its light
Endured so much heavy work
Until it sparkled bright!
 


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 Reviews of "The diamond was rough"
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
Yes, sometimes those diamonds can be 'ouchy'.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
A diamond in the rough holds unseen beauty. It only begins to shine and show its beauty after hard work and struggle -expert polishing can transform an ordinary looking rock into a brilliant gem. Well done!
~Butch

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 19, 2007
I truly enjoyed this one...it has a certain "ring" to it...:) !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
To often we find the trials to strong and tend to give up this one is a gem of inspiration and spiritual meaning to me. Thank you

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
It is worth the effort to see it shine. Very well done. Hugs to you distant sister!! Laura

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Too many give up before the diamond is made..


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Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Suzie,

Like everything else. One has to work at anything worth having.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Excellent metaphor and wisdom write!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Diamonds are ugly until enduring duress of polishing, they sparkle. So does love. Anyone who thinks love is easy, is in for failure. I like the way you brought this out. Victor

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Love is good and bad, Well done
Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Symbolically meaningful; thanks for sharing this gem, Suzie. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Such are diamonds...


nice write.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
LOVELY Suzie!!!


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