Something to think on...

Chrissy

The second line grabbed me Susie..."the space between"..and all the implications of where that uncertainty takes me. Life is so preciaus as are each of it's seconds. They pass far too quickly to be wasted even while doing all the sould searching and being true to one's self. I couldn;t help but think of the Dave Matthews song by that very phrase...a nice musical background to your piece.
Love, Taylor

Cicero said: "Dum spiro, spero" (While I breathe, I hope) This poem reminds me that we must savor each moment we are given. Beautiful write Suzie.
~Butch

Such an enchanting prose, filled with so many interpretive takes. Thanks for sharing this treasure. My best, Gloria

universal answers respire within our souls as long as we simply allow it to ...

excellent poem, Susie ...

Nicely written Suzie!!

Love tinka

Love the feelings you evoke with this gem Suzie! Good to see you!;-)
Superb poem!

Love,
Eileen

An interesting perspective on the journey through life and its mountains and valleys. Thank you, Suzie. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Life's journey is full of tests and trials...isn't it great that "You" have control of your life and "You" have to make your choices...not someone else!

Suzie,
Enjoyed your poetry! Nicely done!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Nicely said. Very evocative. Good metaphor.

Ah Suzie almost missed this one but I am glad I did not. It is smooth as velvet and lovely look at the future and your thought process. Confusion looked at without anger but with a sense of wonder and joy that you have the choices and are free to make them. As always well done sweet friend.

Fee

<We’re the arrow and the bow>

Very empowering, must say.
Safi

When He says GO. Just do it...

Very inspirational poem. Enjoyed this verrrrrrrry much

This gives me an Interesting feeling...I'm a Sagittarius, this line "We’re the arrow and the bow" is my archer symbol...Sagittarius, the centaur, merges beast and woman into a unique creature...It is also a reminder that a bow and arrow are useless apart, but together a formidable weapon, which is metaphorical of world unity and the weapon of peace...the Temperance tarot card is ruled by Sagittarius...your line here "The in-breath, the out-breath" correlates to the Temperance card, where thesis and anti-thesis merge together to get the even more useful synthesis...relevant poem, Suzie...be well...Blessed Be.

Sage

Well now, a mouthful indeed! Decisions can sometime be difficult, but pick your path and stick with. Follow your dreams and be happy.

Be safe,
Karen

Lovely poem. Meditation...it is never too late, even if you are drawing your last breath. Wise lady you are, and an excellent poet.

Elizabeth

Well spoken in that you relate what many feel.

"Interesting feeling
The space between
Knowing, unknowing
Answers unseen"

There is so much that remains a mystery, but with
a open heart and mind, much is revealed...enjoyed this piece.

Allen