This is great poetry, you did a wonderful job. Much imagination is demonstrated. I really like the second paragraph. " Every step we take ignites a fate of its own " is powerful ... A-1 job.
Very well expressed in terms of our abilities to change the world with only the power of our smiles and hands outreached in friendship. Very touching write dear friend.
hugs and a smile,
Fee
Suzie,
This poem speaks much truth. None of us know where our lives are headed, yet that is exactly what makes life sweeter.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
Reflections and Nature Watercolors is a collection of Margaret's spontaneous positive thoughts in celebrating and reflecting on life and her nature watercolors.
Regis
Love Tinka
Be always safe,
Karen
well done Suzie...
John
hugs and a smile,
Fee
This poem speaks much truth. None of us know where our lives are headed, yet that is exactly what makes life sweeter.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
Jill
Your poem says it all. Life is indeed a carousel ride. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.