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devastated
by Pia Shannon → (All Poetry by Pia Shannon)
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life is death death is life either or turned inside out

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Devastated


 


Losing self, again


Gone off track


Consumed by need


Afraid of tomorrow.


Going nowhere fast


Hitting dirt


This time I don’t want


To get up.


Crushed for sure


Nowhere to go


Come to the end


Nothing left


Only the pain


That consumes


This heart.                         Pia


 


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 Reviews of "devastated"
Reviewed by Jen Knox
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
Heartrending writing. Yet, with an ephemeral feel that offers the idea that this, too, shall pass.

Reviewed by William Heffner
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Well done, but remember that true joy is just beyond the pain so push!

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

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Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on May 30, 2007
Powerful heartfelt writing~`*

Reviewed by Lolly Peele (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2006
What a beautiful way to express such pain. I hope it's not a personal experience.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 20, 2006
Ouch! I hope this well expressed poem is not your personal experience today. If so, I hope your life will soon be filled with love and light!

Reviewed on April 18, 2006
:)

..... sooooo much pain for that Sun, on the 29th degree !~!

Where to go?

Who to confide in?

Don't be a stranger, Pia ..... :)

take care

yogi

:)



Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
A painful write excellently expressed. R


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