Peeking In (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

Trash the clock. Well done. R

Reviewed on February 7, 2008

LOL! Loved the ending! I was going right along the subtle rhyme and flow and then all of the sudden, whammo! Crap...hit the perverbial fan. Loved it!

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Wow! fabulous write Fee, hope your dreams carry over into tonights sleep...sweet dreams dear friend. Hugs, Peggy

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

How I hate when such a beautiful dream end
This is a stunning view of morning thoughts
My advice is, get rid of the alarm clock!!
Fee as always brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

... that bloody alarm clock! :)) It sure does know it's timing well, but I rather wonder whether it is our never-sleeping Jiminy Cricket conscience that somehow guards us from those enticing waking dreams between sleeping and awake... you know, lest we slip through the chink of realities and find ourselves in the non-confining spaces of parallel worlds. We are faced with a multiplicity of such doors every day of our lives... it's a wonder our lives continue in a straight line at all...

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on February 5, 2008

Yes dear cuz the irish certainly does run through our veins. But isn't it wonderful. Great write cuz and kill the alarm clock.

Love you cuz
Selena

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

So sad when such a dream ends. Lovely write Fee.

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Those damn alarms -- always at that precise moment! Great write.

Sanja xo

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Fee, you certainly do have some wicked memories...love holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Just gotta hate those ....alarm clocks, great write I think we have all had similar dreams.

Love ya face Cuz XOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Don't you just hate it when the alarm breaks a breathtaking moment? Whew! You certainly have great dreams!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Oh....at least it was not a nightmare!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

At least you slept ... contented :)!

Sandy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

i love the sweet anticipation of this--dang alarm!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Looks like your alarm clock messed up a nice spooning....LOL
Hmmm.... a nice write to heat up a cold Dakota morning..... if just that damn alarm clock would have malfunctioned! **pout**
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

SWEET!!!

You are the consumate voyuer Fee but, in this case, I'm sure no one minded.
I enjoyed this very much.
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Beautiful dream Fee,,,,love,,"Like a moth to a flame you lured me"
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Fantasy interruptus! I'd throw that danged old alarm clock OUT. Excellent write, Fee, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

WOW!...you really know how to lead up to a fiasco! LOL!
This is EXACTLY what happened this morning...except, we don't own an alarm clock...ha ha! na-nee na-nee boo boo!:)
Very sensual write, Fee~ all the right words, just leave out the crap!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

How come we always dream those dreams right before the alarm goes off??
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

That damned alarm clock has ruined many a perfect dream!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Cute write, Fee; well penned! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Shot that alarm-clock you pudding-head!!!!!!now I wouldn't know what you did next, and THAT'S NO FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Trembling Georg