Acidic Love's Refrain (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

been there been there been there, but then who hassn't? sometimes the rightest words come out all wrong. excellent work as always.
your friend, kathy

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 31, 2009

a simple task, not -- mean what you say and say what you mean? -- semantics and linguistics trip up the best intentions to communicate acurately -- well done Felix -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 30, 2009

those unsavory Emotions can really cause a person to have loose lips when dealing with pain, been there; done that myself unfortunately...
your poem brings back those lessons learned
Much Love & Inspirations
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 29, 2009

Many a time we gave and received that "oops! I didn't meant it"

Georg

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

True to say that many words come with barbs, and they stick in the tender places of the one we fling them at. I wish this were not so. Have a hug my friend., J'nia

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Ditto... sweet Fee..well done indeed...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Words DO hurt, Fee, and this is so sad! Powerfully penned; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Fee, anyone can relate to this telling tale that has been in a relationship. I finally left after 32 years!

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Hi Fee, like daggers words are taken sometimes, when they are not meant that way... hope the morrow has you smiling in the trueness... :} thank you for sharing.

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Words can hurt another deeply,,,may there be words to heal those wounds inflicted. Love the way you ended this Fee.
Hugs.
Christine

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

sharp edged daggers
poisoned with barbed tips

Another masterpiece Fee! Well done...

Anna

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

A wiseful poem Felix.Very well written,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

well meant words lay
twisted in the mazes of love

How so sadly true, far too often.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Such sad thoughts of words that hurt. Well penned Fee.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

It's difficult at times when angry, but it's so important not to say things we later regret, for no matter how sorry we are, once those words are out there, they can't be taken back. Wise write, Fee.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

acidic teardrops burn right through the heart & soul ..

quite a perceptive poem, Felix ...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

Fee,
The hardest part is trying not to say words we'll regret. Great insight here. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

WOW.....very dark...and sad :( :( :(

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

such wise words, not only in love but in life!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

I usually find if I sleep on a problem/argument etc, things seem to get better the next day...and you sir, are just a big softy and good for you in that vane...Ed