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Garden of Sorrow
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Garden of Sorrow

Reclusive she walks in her garden of sorrow
Cold rain pummels down on her soul
Rose petals bashed into earthly submission
But the thorns on the bush reach their goal

There’s a smell of wet linen and heartaches
‘Neath willows that sympathetically weep
Pauses a moment, pitifully tries to remember
Standing on the edge of that abyss so deep

A mocking bird croons, perched on his treetop
He’s sang to a thousand sad stories before
As her farewell tears hide in the raindrops
One last time recalling laughter and more

She washes down pills with raw whiskey
Lays down where he once promised her all
Knowing now that love is all too fleeting
and the cold rain continued to fall…

 

 

 

 

 


 

 


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 Reviews of "Garden of Sorrow"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
Another excellent work Fee
hug
Kat

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on May 25, 2011
Thank you for sharing such a deep knowing. Your choice of words and phrasing can only be by one who has been there.

Richard

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Fee - you have not lost the touch of love and all it's sides, side steps, Ecstasy and sweet sorrows. I missed reading you and I am so happy to see you again, as always, a wonderful soul retching, but powerful piece.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 17, 2011
My favorite out of all the ones (15?) I've read tonight. This spoke to me from its beginning. Fantastic writing, Fee. Love and hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2011
Fee, A beautifully and saddening piece of poetry.
One can envision with your descriptive words...
another excellent poem!
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 14, 2011
So very sad but well written Cuz.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 13, 2011
sad-haunting--well done!

Reviewed on May 12, 2011
Fee,

How beautifully written, and how tragic!

Mary

Reviewed on May 11, 2011
Can feel the chilling pain and the want to check out, the rain that does not end for day's....powerful poetics. Morgan

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
Oh my ..I do feel the pain here sighhh great write sweet Fee...Hugsss

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
its so sad :( falling into abyss....never , its painful, one gets lost...no more abyssesss...just present happiness :))

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
Tragic story, Fee....one can feel her pain in your words....nicely done!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
Another very sad piece, my friend.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 11, 2011
Excellent write, Fee. Sad but well done.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
Captivating Dearest Fee........
A tragedy of eons perfectly penned from the incredible depth of your empathetic heart!
Love it!
Love you too Dear Friend from afar!! xox :-D

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
Fee, you capture the depth of the heart and soul with this sorrowful peace. Be well and watch your mail my friend...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
Crying in the rain is better, as no one notices the tears for the rain...as always with you a bit of a sad romantic write...e

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
oh...such a sad song Fee, ended on a tearful note~

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
I find the best time to cry is in the rain.... Nobody knows... But I'm afraid the rain cannot hide everything. Pills & raw whiskey? Likely hiding her tears is the last thing on her mind.

Fee, this is a real sad one, but you drew me in... Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
Tender and profound, a beautiful piece!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
A Touching write indeed Laura

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
Reviewed on May 10, 2011
Fee - Captivating, overwhelming and very sad - yet, very well done!

God Bless You,
Deborah


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