Reclusive she walks in her garden of sorrow
Cold rain pummels down on her soul
Rose petals bashed into earthly submission
But the thorns on the bush reach their goal
There’s a smell of wet linen and heartaches
‘Neath willows that sympathetically weep
Pauses a moment, pitifully tries to remember
Standing on the edge of that abyss so deep
A mocking bird croons, perched on his treetop
He’s sang to a thousand sad stories before
As her farewell tears hide in the raindrops
One last time recalling laughter and more
She washes down pills with raw whiskey
Lays down where he once promised her all
Knowing now that love is all too fleeting
and the cold rain continued to fall…
Fee - you have not lost the touch of love and all it's sides, side steps, Ecstasy and sweet sorrows. I missed reading you and I am so happy to see you again, as always, a wonderful soul retching, but powerful piece.
Captivating Dearest Fee........
A tragedy of eons perfectly penned from the incredible depth of your empathetic heart!
Love it!
Love you too Dear Friend from afar!! xox :-D
I find the best time to cry is in the rain.... Nobody knows... But I'm afraid the rain cannot hide everything. Pills & raw whiskey? Likely hiding her tears is the last thing on her mind.
Fee, this is a real sad one, but you drew me in... Thanks Dick
This is a sentimental and epic story about a young man, injured in the Viewnam War, who returns to Dallas, Texas, in 1964, and begins rebuilding his life. Set against the rock and roll era of the early 1960’s, when casual sex and recreational drugs w
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Kat
Richard
Sheila
One can envision with your descriptive words...
another excellent poem!
Always,
Deborah
Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose
How beautifully written, and how tragic!
Mary
Hugs,
Anna
A tragedy of eons perfectly penned from the incredible depth of your empathetic heart!
Love it!
Love you too Dear Friend from afar!! xox :-D
Be always safe,
Karen
Fee, this is a real sad one, but you drew me in... Thanks Dick
Blessings,
Christine
God Bless You,
Deborah