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The lines we've drawn
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We've danced here on the sand together,
so many times before,
safe and clothed in each other's longing
the moon lighting our faces,
the wind wrapping round us
like a blanket,
the mist of the sea carressing our hair
the waves gently crashing in our ears.
Lost in fond embraces,
we've looked upon each other,
with a glow
that felt like it must have come
from heaven.
We've touched each other
with a joy and a sweetness
that seemed to end all pain.
But now,
naked and alone,
separate and lost,
in our selfishness and intoleration
the bitter storm of life
has come to claim us.
We beg the warmth and laughter
we've shared together
to give us shelter.
We cry out for our special love
to save us,
but it's gone,
All thats left between us
is the battered ground
and the lines we've drawn.

Copyright 2005 Pierre Ortega
 

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 Reviews of "The lines we've drawn"
Reviewed by Cody Piggott (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2005
OMG--Wow this is one of my favorites. bRiLlIaNt.

Love,Cody

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 4, 2005
You write the "bitter storm" well...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
emotionally vivid atmosphere ...

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on March 27, 2005
A beautiful poem about great poem. Well written with excelent images. Henry


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