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In a perfect world
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In a perfect world
it would'nt be our fault,
there would be,
no sorrow to hault
The love of giving hearts,
no pain to keep our souls apart.
In a perfect world
we would'nt have to wonder
if we really love or hate one another,
If we could get along by trying,
If we could ever stop the lying.
In a perfect world
it would'nt be our living,
that taught us our tolerance
and our forgiving.
We would'nt be led by greed to gain.
There would be no struggle,
our needs to sustain.
In a perfect world
only love and joy would exist,
there would be no evil
or selfishness to resist,
A smile and A laugh,
could only mean one thing,
to lonliness we'd never have to cling.
In a perfect world.

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 Reviews of "In a perfect world"
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 23, 2006
If love were as perfect in living as we imagine it to be in our hearts then it would all be too easy. To quest for perfection, not settle for seconds is heaven on this earth. I know it's out there and I refuse to muddy the waters for anything less. Keep looking but don't choose out of desperation...choose because your heart led you to it's mate.
Susan

Reviewed by Cody Piggott (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2005
Yep, u have explained perfection brilliantly.---hmm if only.....

Love,Cody

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Dear Pierre,
This is lyrical and would make a fantastic song. In a perfect world, all would read this and heed its words. Excellent!
Chanti

Reviewed on June 21, 2005
Ah, so very true, how I wish I lived in that world, this is so deep and beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
i'm not so sure about the perfect world theory. from strife comes change...but then on the other hand, in a perfect world, there would be no need for change...wow i have to think about this some more...good poem

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
This has been perfectly done :-)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
This is earth, and perfect doesn't exist, but through your writing you've given us a chance to know how sweet it would taste.
Delightful read Pierre.

Lisa

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
Brilliant. Smiling uses less muscles, so yer better smile alot more i guess.

sad the cynics smile.. If only...


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